"they start playfully making out. Their three dogs—two pit
bulls and a terrier—come trotting out and join in. After
rolling around the living room, they collapse on the floor."
...This might need a rewrite.
I read the first ten. It's alright. Not terribly funny but it moves along and the writing is clear. A lot of the exposition is delivered through dialogue which leaves a shallow impression on the characters.
I would suggest showing (not telling) us how much Fran has given up for trev before he dumps her.