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Note: I'll be posting 10 scripts at a time every 24 hours. Note: The names are pseudonyms. These are NOT the names of the writers.
The Flesh Won't Be Missed by Jack Ketch - Short - A witch and her psychotic boyfriend plan a robbery with the use of a very special candle. - pdf, format
Territory by Alan Smithee - Short - Even killers should respect *certain* boundaries.... - pdf, format
Wisp by Harley G Wolfe Jr. (Hugh Hoyland) - Short - Don't follow the light. 8 pages - pdf, format
Scottish Lullaby by The Son of Barbara McDonald L. - Short - A peculiar boy becomes the focus of dark ambition and supernatural forces, as jealous gods reach from the past. - pdf, format
Bell Tolls by William Calcraft - Short - A disabled woman uses her visions of the moments after people die to battle a Banshee that feeds on souls. - pdf, format
Them That's Dead by Thomas Pierrepoint - Short - The dark art of necromancy proves perilous for a cutthroat trio of thieves seeking lost treasure. - pdf, format
The Cries by Harry Bernard Allen - Short - An old man must save his granddaughter from the demon that took her mother twenty years earlier. - pdf, format
Just a quick question, no hurry needed on the reply: should we at any point submit rewrites? Not so much a rewrite as a submission with corrected errors, such as spelling mistakes, punctuation, etc. Probably not fair to do this as the moderator has enough work. Just asking.
If you want to resubmit, wait until after the challenge is over.
When I resubmit, it will be primarily for changing my aliases. But I also taking a few things under advisement and will weigh them in. I'd be sooo tempted to break rank and respond to some comments...
So, you're saying Jeff has reviewed yours already????
James
I decided to edit my above response and put in "If...I'd be.." or something to that effect. But rest assured, when one of my two does come up, I will respond when the time is right.
Well, love him or hate him, it looks like you're getting the classic version.
I gotta be me...and I gotta be honest. I don't mean to put anyone down or trash their scripts, but if I'm going to spend 30 minutes reading and writing feedback, I'm going to be telling ti like I see it.
James, my man, I hope I haven't reviewed yours yet...right????
I'll try to be nicer going forward...
I've just gone through my second box of tissues because of your harsh comments....
Read the first ten. I'm actually pleasantly surprised overall. Found three I really like. The others were interesting. I like it because of the wide range. We're not all reading the same scenario told differently over and over. I think the creative freedom really helped this go-round.
Looking forward to the next batch. And Jeff's comments. He'll recognize it, the second he tries to scroll. . Just to piss you off.
Must we really, Phil? Isn't it obvious. But if people think it's necessary, I will from here on in.
Sandra
Sandra,
You have a good point. With regard to the OWC (and perhaps ongoing for all scripts on the boards) I think I should explicitly say, "Read the Script before you read the Thread".
Considering that in my last review I spoiled like crazy.