Quoted from Sham The death scene at the school probably hit closest to home.  As a student, my desk sits underneath a TV that hangs on the wall from a small metal bar, and I constantly fear it's going to snap at any moment and come crashing down on me.  You captured that feeling perfectly, and the scissor impalements were a bonus.  Ouch!

I know what you mean, man. I always imagine walking under there and having it snap and come close to, if not, killing me.

Quoted from Sham Character development is good, but the dialogue is WAY too duplicative of the first sequel.  The entire time I was reading it, I felt like "been there, done that."

Yeah sequels tend to do that. You always here the, "We have to get out of here" thing or some other overused line.

Quoted from Sham Overall, I'd recommend redoing the stop sign death completely and reworking some of the dialogue.

But I like the stop sign death!   Lol

Thanks for reading this Sham. I'm glad you liked it.

Sean

I liked this alot. I like all the Final Destinations, I kind of see where my formatting went wrong in my last two scripts.

OMG This is pretty wierd now with the whole bridge collapsing in Minnesota!

To be quite honest, I've never been a fan of the films. I liked 2, didn't like 3 or 1. Having said that, I dig the script. The dialogue at times stumbles but more often than not, it succeeds. A lot of the scripts I've read so far on the site haven't flowed well in terms of sentence structure and dialogue so this is surprisingly refreshing in that sense. Not to say that its perfect, but its definitely good. The ending is a little generic for my taste. Very cliche' but overall, I dug it. Keep it up.