Thanks for reviewing it, thought it wasn;t gonna get any more. I'll try and go through these one at a time.

Emotionless is probably a typo, sorry and those guys aren't really meant to be R.P.D. Officers, they're more messengers with the head of S.T.A.R.S., which I migth add in at a later date.

Bravo and Alpha landings are meant to tie in with the games so I'm glad that works. Just kidna difficult showing that the team get attacked without showing the stuff at the MP van (that happens but I don't show it, saving it for Zero), so when Edward gets dragged under by the dogs (my own homage to the Raptor scene from JP 2, loved that bit) Rebecca's on the train. Just thought I'd say.

Valid points about Barry's dialogue and first zombie intro. I read somewhere that Capcom had called the first zombie Mike so I thought I'd put in a little trivia about that.

Quoted Text PG 34 - You say That instead of Those... PG 35 - You say Beg instead of Bug.

  

Apologies.

The fear factor, yeah some of it could be cut, but I figure its best to write more than you need than less than you need. But I guess some of it would be cut for pacing reasons. I put the lockpick scene in because I realised I had Barry givng her it, but she never used it. So I put it in, but it does slow it down a bit, so it might be best to cut lockpicks altogether.

I don't know what you mean about the trap door bit, do you mean back door?

Oh yeah and on another topic I got into the Falkirk Forth Valley College today. I'll be doing an HNC in Communications with Media rather than an NQ cause they felt it was more my level. So that's some good news, for me at least.

By Trap Door I meant Trap Room Sorry, The Ceiling Coming down - And Congradulations!

Now I getcha. I want to get around to uploading Resident Evil 2 soon, it just might take time, I got robbed on Saturday and over a thousand pounds worth of PS2 games, DVD'S and electronic equipment got stolen. They left the TV (cause its too big) and my computer, so at least I still have my screenplays, sucks majorly though.)

You got robbed!  oh man sorry to hear that...anyway anyone who's after some cheap PS2 games let me know...only kidding.  Sorry that's in a bad taste, I'd back-up your scripts to a flash drive or somet, I know I do just in case my comp decides to die on me.

Nah it's fine. I mean sure, getting robbed is a major pain in the ass, but everything can be rebought within time, just not something you really want to have to do.

Anyway I'm gonna buy a wireless netcard so that I can try and get the internet in my room, I've heard of some people doing it before in this place and if it works I'll be able to download Celtx onto my comp and be online more.