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Zoe
Posted: October 5th, 2019, 2:37pm Report to Moderator
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This is for a short action film but might turn into a feature. Hostage is a working title.

A waitress needs to catch her flight so that she can attend her cousin's wedding, but ends up being held hostage where she works.
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Quoted from Zoe
This is for a short action film but might turn into a feature. Hostage is a working title.

A waitress needs to catch her flight so that she can attend her cousin's wedding, but ends up being held hostage where she works.


You don't need the information about the flight at all. Start with, when a small town waitress gets held hostage at the restaurant, she must dot-dot-dot. Then fill in the blank. What are the stakes?


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Zoe
Posted: October 7th, 2019, 2:56pm Report to Moderator
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Thank for the tip eldave1.

Here is my 2nd attempt of the logline

When a small town waitress gets held hostage she must find a way to escape, only to learn that the hostage takers have planted a bomb.

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