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We are never going to agree, so I'll make this my last post.

You enjoyed the film, I was bored for the entire second half of the film. That is a problem in any kind of feature. I've seen a lot of terrible films, but rarely have I been so bored in a cinema. Obviously when the film was over I went through it to see how such an action packed film could have left me so unentertained.

The root cause is structure.


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100% on what happened to the family. The characters were the real stake


The problem is that the family were unimportant. In the first film the survivors began the film as perhaps the only humans left on earth. They weren't just intereting characters, they had a very powerful abstract presence in the film. There was also a very clear progression and a solid story that was interesting. Also they were normal humans facing overwhelming odds.

That is crucial in a thriller. It is what makes it thrilling. You can play with this convention, Predator is a good example. They had incredibly tough heroes, but crucially an unbelievably tough opponent, hence it worked. Here the odds at the start of the film were in the favour of the good guys. There was no enemy at all. The only threat to the future of mankind in 28 is Andy! We know that the enemy can be defeated if they just leave, they've already done it once.



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they were fighting for survival. I don't understand why you need some greater cause or ideal


I didn't care about anyone in the 28 weeks film film apart from Carlyle's character. That is a major problem as far as I'm concerned. Ultimately for you they were important but for me they were irrelevant so there were no stakes to care about.
Because the characters were crap, and because they CAUSED the problem in the first place. So I didn't care whether they lived or died. Their mission at the end was even more pointless. The set up was truly awful. Amateur on so many levels. You say that we should be concerned for their survival, yet we've already been told that they are going to survive because they are immune and Andy's only narrative purpose is to spread the disease.

We were never introduced to anyone in the film who could develop a vaccine, there was never any danger of the virus spreading (it had already been proven that it could be contained).



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but I think it's setting the bar too low, if he's meant to solicit sympathy just for qualifying as a human being.


He may not be meant to solicit sympathy, my point is that the opening of the film introduces him as the main character and as the point of view of the film. When they kill him off, there is no point of view and the film becomes pointless.

It sets the film up a certain way, rightly or wrongly and after that the film is forced to move the action along artificially. The photograph, the character jumping on the helicopter, the magical (and contradictory to the mechanics of the film world) appearances of Carlyle are all results of the fact that the film had nowhere to go. It was setup t odo a different job and thereafter the film simply couldn't fit. It was set up to be a human drama and then tried to turn itself into something else.


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This is the danger of classification. If something doesn't fit, we assume the prodcut is at fault instead of our system. To say that a movie fails because it isn't a clear-cut action-film, thriller or horror is a strange notion indeed and this may prompt all genre-cross over to be regarded as utter failures henceforth.


By the same token you can argue that there is no such thing as a poor film, because it's just messing with convention. Mixing genres is all very well, but if you don't know what you are doing, you end up with a mess like this film. It was boring. That is the worst condemnation of a film of this sort I can give.

Aliens was a great film with several superb and intersting characters. Even the bit parts had their own voice. You even cared about Frost who was only in it for a few minutes. It was also a completely consistent film.

28 weeks had no story line, no character development, no one to care about, made no point about human nature or anything else and was very boring because of it. It was a complete mismash of styles.

A thriller needs high stakes, this had none, an outbreak film needs an external threat, here the only threat was the child who we were supposed to want to win, a horror needs a scary villain, here we had only a comical father zombie who magically displayed an ability to pop up wherever the protagonists were.

None of it worked. The only saving grace was the intense atmosphere of the opening scene and the quite decent cut scene when Carlyle broke into the car park. The rest of the film was as bad as I have ever seen.

Anyway, enough of this. We should be writing ourselves.

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Fair enough, I'll just respond to some of your points here then.


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It doesn't in either of them. It comes under a huge threat but survives.


That isn't true.

First of all, the literal world doesn't die in 28 days nor Weeks later, what we're calling "the world", I assume, are the people inhabiting the sphere of interest (Britain), or in Aliens the colony. The world dies in Aliens after we've been introduced to it and the possible threat of the Aliens. then the marines are sent in to kill the thing that killed the world.

Secondly the world LITERALLY dies in Dawn of the Dead. Both the original and the remake. In the original two main characters escape but everything is at this point dead, and the the remake even the main characters are killed off.


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Because the characters were crap, and because they CAUSED the problem in the first place. So I didn't care whether they lived or died. Their mission at the end was even more pointless. The set up was truly awful. Amateur on so many levels.


Well then your problem isn't really that there are no higher ideals, it's that the characters are crap. The other thing is just a symptom of the latter. Besides Robert Carlyle was the conspirator of the actual break out, why isn't he to blame?

And I think we already established we don't see eye-to-eye on the characters, so I'll just move on.



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You say that we should be concerned for their survival, yet we've already been told that they are going to survive because they are immune.

It's like the second Matrix where Neo is completely invulnerable so all his fights are boring because we already know he can't lose.


Mind you, everyone BUT the whiny kid and his sister died, so I think it's a bit having it both ways when you say there's no need to worry about their survival when most of the characters actually die. Especially seeing how I already stated I only cared about the sister of the two kids.



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He may not be meant to solicit sympathy, my point is that the opening of the film introduces him as the main character and as the point of view of the film. When they kill him off, there is no point of view and the film becomes pointless.

It sets the film up a certain way, rightly or wrongly and after that the film is forced to move the action along artificially. The photograph, the character jumping on the helicopter, the magical (and contradictory to the mechanics of the film world) appearances of Carlyle are all results of the fact that the film had nowhere to go.


I think that's a bit conservative. Saying that a film has no way to go because of a shift in focus is a controversial statement and there are precedents that prove the opposite.

By the time they kill of Carlyle it's not like they haven't introduced other characters to us, it's not like the movie struggles to find another character to follow. I don't think it makes much sense to say that because the film didn't OPEN on Tam, Andy, Doyle and Scarlett the movie can't be about them. Again, think about Aliens. We aren't introduced to the Marines until 50 minutes into the film, does that mean we don't care about them?

I think the shift in focus is actually kinda bold and unexpected.




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By the same token you can argue that there is no such thing as a poor film, because it's just messing with convention. Mixing genres is all very well, but if you don't know what you are doing, you end up with a mess like this film. It was boring. That is the worst condemnation of a film of this sort I can give.


A poor film isn't a genre. How does that even remotely apply to your example of purist genre-enforcing? A poor film is often poor because of things such as bad acting, shoddy cinematography, sloppy direction and poor writing. If there is a genre that embraces these hallmarks as pivotal, then I don't know it.

Fine, you thought it's boring. It may be non-specific and impossible to argue against but at least I can relate to the core sentiment, given my Transformers experience this summer.


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Aliens was a great film with several superb and intersting characters. Even the bit parts had their own voice. You even cared about Frost who was only in it for a few minutes. It was also a completely consistent film.

28 weeks had no story line, no character development, no one to care about, made no point about human nature or anything else and was very boring because of it. It was a complete mismash of styles.


One important thing to remember when comparing character development in 28 Weeks with Aliens is that 28 Weeks was just over 90 minutes long whereas Aliens was 150 minutes long. And I do think 28 Weeks was too short, but it's an unfair compairson.

Everything you said I think I've already argued against. You didn't like the characters, I did (for the most part), you didn't like the story, I did, and honestly I was quite happy that it didn't try to say anything about "human nature", because THAT would, if anything, have been a poor mix. Like the slow song on a Kid Rock album. Which, to me epitomizes, "boring".


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A thriller needs high stakes, this had none, an outbreak film needs an external threat, here the only threat was the child who we were supposed to want to win, a horror needs a scary villain, here we had only a comical father zombie who magically displayed an ability to pop up wherever the protagonists were.


Come on, this is getting ridiculous. I know you're amped up on hating the movie right now, but you can't honestly be saying that a movie about infected zombies (for all intents and purposes) has no 'external threat'? The infected weren't figments of imagination, they were really eating people, and that is by my definition a threat.

You logic is sort of argumentative. Because you didn't like the characters, you argue that there were no stakes, and because there were no stakes there was no story-line and so on. You can't say something isn't a thriller because you didn't like the characters. It's not a qualifying parameter of a thriller that it must have great characters. Nor any other genre. You can say it's a bad thriller, or a bad horror but you can't say it's neither just because you didn't care about the characters.

And I'm still not sure where you're getting these presets from? A horror MUST have a scary villain? Says who? Isn't that why most horror films are such crap? because they think they need a scary boogeyman?

That's why Carlyle the zombie fails. Because they think we need a boogeyman.


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None of it worked. The only saving grace was the intense atmosphere of the opening scene and the quite decent cut scene when Carlyle broke into the car park. The rest of the film was as bad as I have ever seen.

Anyway, enough of this. We should be writing ourselves.


Well, it did work. While the movie by any means isn't perfect it made the plot work because of an engaging cinematographic approach and direction and unconventional plot twists that elevated it above the cookie cutter sequels we're used to. An ominous score too made this one to watch. At least in my opinion.

But yes, we really should get back to writing.



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You logic is sort of argumentative. Because you didn't like the characters, you argue that there were no stakes, and because there were no stakes there was no story-line and so on. You can't say something isn't a thriller because you didn't like the characters. It's not a qualifying parameter of a thriller that it must have great characters. Nor any other genre. You can say it's a bad thriller, or a bad horror but you can't say it's neither just because you didn't care about the characters.

And I'm still not sure where you're getting these presets from? A horror MUST have a scary villain? Says who? Isn't that why most horror films are such cr**? because they think they need a scary boogeyman?


I just want to reply to this to clarify.

It's not just about the characters. It's about the structure.

The rebirth of Britain was a high stake, but one the film kills off. It isn't replaced by another one. It tried to replace it with the idea of saving Andy, who may have the secret to the virus in his blood. However the film failed to set this up. In order for us to care about that particualr stake the rest of the world had to be under threat. It wasn't.

The military could easily kill all the zombies as had already been shown and we already know that quarantine is perfectly possible. There is no threat to the world and they have already killed Britain.

Therefore the only way that the virus can get out is through Andy being taken to France. So the stakes we have to care about for it to be thrilling simply aren't there.

As I say, it's not solely down to character. the structure of the film is wrong. Not unconventional, just wrong.

The main characters mission becomes not one of survival but of destruction because of the way that the film was set up. There was only one possible outcome of taking Andy to France, the spread of the disease. The whole second half of the film was illogical and pointless.

The story line was inconsistent and hadn't been thought through properly so every plot development had to happen through an absurdity.

The kids being allowed to leave the compound. The kids being able to leave the compound. The janitor having the keys to the containment room. Robert Carlyle having an undue amont of intelligence, contradicting the internal logic of the film as regards the "Rage" virus. The soldier killing his colleagues, the character jumping on the Helicopter, the ability of Carlyle to appear wherever they were despite them driving across the city. the fact that the helicopter could only pick them up at Wembley when London is completely deserted. The fact that the door to the car park could be opened by one man. That there were only two entrances, snipers all over the roof yet no-one shot him as no-one was watching the doors.

The fact is that it is difficult to think of one sensible plot line in the whole film.

Each and every major plot change was illogical and this happened because the script had lost its sense of purpose. This is what I mean by the fact that it had no where to go. It had to keep breaking its own logic to progress because of the way it was set up.

If you analyse the key beats of the film, you see where all the problems lie. Everything is backwards. They have to invent a threat because it doesn't exist at the start of the film. They answer all the questions that the opening act proposes by half way and do not ask any more questions.

Whatever you say about genres and conventions, a film like this needs to have a central protagonist that has an important goal. No-one in this film did.

Children of Men was an equivalent film in terms of the plot in the second half of 28. COM was successful because it was important that the child made it through to the end. Here it was not only unimportant it was something that logically we shouldn't want to happen.

There is no way round that. It was illogical, not unconventional, everything in the film was conventional. They just had to keep inventing artifical scenes to keep the tempo up.


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A horror MUST have a scary villain? Says who? Isn't that why most horror films are such cr**? because they think they need a scary boogeyman


I don't think so. They are usually crap because the film, like this one, is riddled with cliches and absurdities and the villain isn't scary.

A horror film doesn't necessarily need a scary villain, but this film RELIED upon having a scary villain. It's just that he wasn't. People were laughing out loud whenever he appeared out of the blue.

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I just want to reply to this to clarify.

It's not just about the characters. It's about the structure.

The rebirth of Britain was a high stake, but one the film kills off. It isn't replaced by another one. It tried to replace it with the idea of saving Andy, who may have the secret to the virus in his blood. However the film failed to set this up. In order for us to care about that particualr stake the rest of the world had to be under threat. It wasn't.

The military could easily kill all the zombies as had already been shown and we already know that quarantine is perfectly possible. There is no threat to the world and they have already killed Britain.

Therefore the only way that the virus can get out is through Andy being taken to France. So the stakes we have to care about for it to be thrilling simply aren't there.


Even so, my point is still valid, I feel. Something doesn't a specific structure to be a certain genre.

As for the stakes, I think the fact that the movie argues that some people are immune and become carriers, PLUS the fact that the virus actually gets out, shows that it's not perfectly possible to contain it.


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As I say, it's not solely down to character. the structure of the film is wrong. Not unconventional, just wrong.


Well, unless you think the movie's structure is convetional, it is about unconventionality. And you obviously feel that detour around convention is what makes it wrong; or why it doesn't work.


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The main characters mission becomes not one of survival but of destruction because of the way that the film was set up. There was only one possible outcome of taking Andy to France, the spread of the disease. The whole second half of the film was illogical and pointless.


That doesn't make sense. Of course their mission is survival. Andy isn't a threat until he's bitten and infected in the very last minutes of the film...

You don't have to keep repeating the mantra about it being pointless and illogical, since I've already adressed this and we just plain disagree.


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The story line was inconsistent and hadn't been thought through properly so every plot development had to happen through an absurdity.

The kids being allowed to leave the compound. The kids being able to leave the compound. The janitor having the keys to the containment room. Robert Carlyle having an undue amont of intelligence, contradicting the internal logic of the film as regards the "Rage" virus. The soldier killing his colleagues, the character jumping on the Helicopter, the ability of Carlyle to appear wherever they were despite them driving across the city.


The only apparent absurdity I can think is Robert Carlyle getting through his quarantined wife. And yes, how he popped up everywhere.

The kids weren't allowed to leave? What do you mean?

The soldier killing his colleagues I've already adressed and I don't think you ever commented on my explanation, so I think it's kinda strange to bring it up now. He was killing those soldiers who were bitten or in the process of being bitten. They were gone.

Why is the character jumping on the helicopter absurd? He was told he would be left to be zombie-food. What was he supposed to do? Behave himself? In anything the absurdity is that Flynn didn't want to risk taking the others.


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Each and every major plot change was illogical and this happened because the script had lost its sense of purpose. This is what I mean by the fact that it had no where to go. It had to keep breaking its own logic to progress because of the way it was set up.


What do you mean breaking its own logic? After the outbreak it becomes about leaving zone 1 and then the city. The characters are then thrown hurdles and setbacks along the way, but I'm not I follow what logic is being broken?


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If you analyse the key beats of the film, you see where all the problems lie. Everything is backwards. They have to invent a threat because it doesn't exist at the start of the film. They answer all the questions that the opening act proposes half way and do not ask any more questions.


The threat is the infected. They exist at the start of the film.


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Whatever you say about genres and conventions, a film like this needs to have a central protagonist that has an important goal. No-one in this film did.


The problem here is that "important goal" is such a subjective definition that can pretty much arbitrarily decide that it's not important, no matter what I argue. but let's think of Alien. What is Ripley's goal? Survial. Is that movie a failure?


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Children of Men was an equivalent film in terms of the plot in the second half of 28. COM was successful because it was important that the child made it through to the end. Here it was not only unimportant it was something that logically we shouldn't want to happen.


Geez...spoiler alert, thanks.  

I obviously haven't seen Children of Men, but from what I have seen the comparison is very thin. It's like comparing Last Night to Dawn of the Dead because they're "about the same thing". But they're two very films in terms of genre, tone, pacing and structure. As I imagine 28 Weeks and COM are.


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There is no way round that. It was illogical, not unconventional, everything in the film was conventional. They just had to keep inventing artifical scenes to keep the tempo up.


Pardon me, but that's just nonsense. You can't lament the fact that the film uses a completely different structure than you expect or are used to and then call it conventional at the same time. Something about a cake and eating it.

Of course the film wasn't conventional. You say it yourself, it kills its supposed main character off before the midpoint. It lets almost everyone die. That's not conventional.


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I don't think so. They are usually crap because the film, like this one, is riddled with cliches and absurdities and the villain isn't scary.

A horror film doesn't necessarily need a scary villain, but this film RELIED upon having a scary villain. It's just that he wasn't. People were laughing out loud whenever he appeared out of the blue.


"People were laughing out loud"? What people? That's like saying "Everyone knows 28 Weeks is bad film! Ask anyone!" It's sorta irrelevant what other people thought of the movie, or else I would referred to its Imdb rating a long time ago.

I think the point is, the film didn't need a scary villain type at all, but somehow it thought it did. So it didn't rely at all on Carlyle since he was superfluous after he turns.



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Of course the film wasn't conventional. You say it yourself, it kills its supposed main character off before the midpoint. It lets almost everyone die. That's not conventional.


It was a very conventional action film, it's just that the structure was broken. It didn't break any new ground, it used established conventions in an incorrect manner and failed to use conventions that actually wotk for this type of movie.

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The only apparent absurdity I can think is Robert Carlyle getting through his quarantined wife. And yes, how he popped up everywhere.

The kids weren't allowed to leave? What do you mean?


A soldier watches the kids leave. Yet despite informing his colleagues they are not instantly brought back inside.

Despite the fact that the Commander of the Battalion is ultimately willing to kill the entire civilian population (another absurdity) he apparently is willing to allow a couple of kids to leave the compound.

A high security, military installation that two kids can circumvent.

Then they bring in a woman who is clearly infected. They don't set up a level 4 quaratine outside the base whilethey run tests, they bring her inside.

They don't post any guards on duty to watch her.

The military allow a janitor access to high-security areas.

Robert Carlyle inexplicably manages to keep a high level of intelligence, contrary to the films internal logic regarding the virus.

He is able to easily enter high security areas, easily killing trained fighters who suddenly become inexplicably stupid.

Why have the people not been given any security drills, despite it being  7 months since the outbreak of the epidemic?  

He isn't picked up on CCTV or spotted by Snipers, even though there is only one possible destination for him to go and there are only two entrances to the car park.

Why is he able to open the door? This is the safe place for the population of Britain. There is only a fire door protecting them? Incredible. The audacity of the filmmakers.

Does the soldier not shoot the sniper on the roof? I thought he did.

Why does the helicopter have to land at Wembley? This is a transparent plot device. He could have landed anywhere.

Why does he want to leave the civilians behind? That is out of keeping with his character and with his training.

Why does he start to spin his helicopter dangerously around when the guy jumps on it in cliched fashion?

Why is there so much blood but no-one gets infected? One drop was enough in the first film.

Why do they want to get the child to France, when they haven't even contacted the French?

Why was Robert Carlyle able to follow the group across the city, when he has succumbed to the virus?

How did he, along with the other cliched running zombies manage to escape the firebombing of the city?

Did they drive as well?

Why does a trained doctor not notice that the child is infected?

Why do they risk taking him to France for no reason? Have they become blind. Can they not see that blood in his eyes?

There are absurdities in even the smallest detail in the film: "The virus doesn't cross species". Er, you remember where it came from don't you?

A truly terrible story, inconsistent, factually incorrect, oblivious to medical and military reality and guilty of being inconsistent with its own logic from the first film, the very worst sin a film can commit.

Not one plot point in the whole film made sense, not one. Unconventional? It was as by the numbers as it gets, using plot devices in every scene to move the action along artificially. The unconventional structure is a by product of writing of the lowest order or more likely of interference from above. The person who wrote the first scene was in no way responsible for writing the shite that came after it. IMO.

An awful film, raised only by energetic camerawork.

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It was a very conventional action film, it's just that the structure was broken. It didn't break any new ground, it used established conventions in an incorrect manner and failed to use conventions that actually wotk for this type of movie.


We were talking about structure and it has unconventional structure and character arcs. There's no way around that. Now you may like it or dislike it, but that doesn't change the fact that it's unconventional. Unconventional doesn't mean "good".

How did it use etsablished conventions in an incorrect manner? If if conventions are used in manners outside outside of the norm, aren't they unconventional?


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A soldier watches the kids leave. Yet despite informing his colleagues they are not instantly brought back inside.

Despite the fact that the Commander of the Battalion is ultimately willing to kill the entire civilian population (another absurdity) he apparently is willing to allow a couple of kids to leave the compound.

A high security, military installation that two kids can circumvent.

Then they bring in a woman who is clearly infected. They don't set up a level 4 quaratine outside the base whilethey run tests, they bring her inside.

They don't post any guards on duty to watch her.

The military allow a janitor access to high-security areas.

Robert Carlyle inexplicably manages to keep a high level of intelligence, contrary to the films internal logic regarding the virus.

He is able to easily enter high security areas, easily killing trained fighters who suddenly become inexplicably stupid.

Why have the people not been given any security drills, despite it being  7 months since the outbreak of the epidemic?  

He isn't picked up on CCTV or spotted by Snipers, even though there is only one possible destination for him to go and there are only two entrances to the car park.

Why is he able to open the door? This is the safe place for the population of Britain. There is only a fire door protecting them? Incredible. The audacity of the filmmakers.

Does the soldier not shoot the sniper on the roof? I thought he did.

Why does the helicopter have to land at Wembley? This is a transparent plot device. He could have landed anywhere.

Why does he want to leave the civilians behind? That is out of keeping with his character and with his training.

Why does he start to spin his helicopter dangerously around when the guy jumps on it in cliched fashion?

Why is there so much blood but no-one gets infected? One drop was enough in the first film.

Why do they want to get the child to France, when they haven't even contacted the French?

Why was Robert Carlyle able to follow the group across the city, when he has succumbed to the virus?

How did he, along with the other cliched running zombies manage to escape the firebombing of the city?

Did they drive as well?

Why does a trained doctor not notice that the child is infected?

Why do they risk taking him to France for no reason? Have they become blind. Can they not see that blood in his eyes?

There are absurdities in even the smallest detail in the film: "The virus doesn't cross species". Er, you remember where it came from don't you?


1.     The commander isn’t informed. it’s not like it’s an executive decision. Besides what’s the hurry to bring them back? There are no more infected, right? That was the assumption they were working under. Plus the kids moved around a lot. I don’t think it’s crazy of them to ask us to suspend belief here, I really don’t.

2.     It’s no high-security military installation the kids circumvent. They cross a bridge in a militarized part of a city with its own infrastructure. And they are spotted doing so.

3.     Infected but not showing symptoms. They will be able to study her better inside with proper equipment. Again – absurd?

4.     Agreed. Stupid.

5.     He’s not really the janitor, it’s just something his kids call him, which is shown in the scene where he shows he has the power to start alarms and halt security access. It’s not a mote point, but I think this needed clarfication as it sounds much more ”absurd” to say a janitor has acces than an inspector or what he’s called.

6.     He does?


7.     So were all the infected in the original? That isn’t absurd. It’s just not particularly realistic.

8.     Who is ”people”? And they haven’t been there for 7 months. Only 4 weeks or so.

9.     Agreed. That was ridiculous.

10.     After he’s jumped by two infected who are biting him.

11.     I assume following the first debacle, he wanted a place that’s guarded and he had an overview over the exits. but no, you would think they could’ve found a roof-top somewhere.

12.     He had character? I thought you said he didn’t? I agree this is very odd indeed, but I hardly think it’s absurd that soldiers don’t follow they’re training after what has happened. That doesn’t happen in real life either.

13.     Because he didn’t want the guy on his helicopter? And because it looked awesome when he decapitated infected with the rotors…?

14.     I don’t remember? Are people splashed with blood in any bodily orifice in the film and avoid infection?

15.     I don’t understand the question at all? Why would the french contact them? I’m even sure who ”they” refers to.

16.     It doesn’t make sense.

17.     The army says themselves that they didn’t get everyone, and we actually see that the street Carlyle is in isn’t hit. So that’s how, I guess…


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Why does a trained doctor not notice that the child is infected?


Who are you talking about here?


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Why do they risk taking him to France for no reason? Have they become blind. Can they not see that blood in his eyes?


Again, who is "they"? When Andy is bitten it’s just him and Tam. Andy isn’t infected until the very last minutes of the film after everyone else has died.


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There are absurdities in even the smallest detail in the film: "The virus doesn't cross species". Er, you remember where it came from don't you?


I noticed that as well. But honestly that’s not something that gets me to walk out of a movie. Especially not a popcorn zombie flick.



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A truly terrible story, inconsistent, factually incorrect, oblivious to medical and military reality and guilty of being inconsistent with its own logic from the first film, the very worst sin a film can commit.


Wow, it's crazy how much I disagree. Oh well.


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Not one plot point in the whole film made sense, not one. Unconventional? It was as by the numbers as it gets, using plot devices in every scene to move the action along artificially. The unconventional structure is a by product of writing of the lowest order or more likely of interference from above. The person who wrote the first scene was in no way responsible for writing the shite that came after it. IMO.

An awful film, raised only by energetic camerawork.


I don't think you're making a lick of sense right now, and making sensational claims like "not on plot device made sense" isn't really helping.

First of all, it didn't use  plot devices in every scene to move the plot along. I don't why you would make such a claim? They have the goal of getting out of the city pretty much from the outbreak begins. that doesn't change. They're thrown hurdles and opposition, naturally, but they're only artifical by virtue of the entire film being WRITTEN.

Secondly, the filmis BY definition UNCONVENTIONAL in killing its supposed main character. You can't run away from that. That simply just isn't by-the-numbers. At least I've read the wrong books on structure then...

Thirdly, you say not one plot-point made sense in the entire film. Do you really mean that or are you exaggerating your case here? I can't tell. Plenty of plot points made sense. Even one which I know you disagree with made sense; the containment: the shooting of civilians. The fire-bombing made sense too.

But I think it's sorta funny how much more fervently you hate the movie now, after debating it with me.  



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Especially not a popcorn zombie flick.


Therein lies the difference I suppose.

28 days later was a superb film. This is a by the numbers zombie flick that made no sense.


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First of all, it didn't use  plot devices in every scene to move the plot along. I don't why you would make such a claim? They have the goal of getting out of the city pretty much from the outbreak begins. that doesn't change. They're thrown hurdles and opposition, naturally, but they're only artifical by virtue of the entire film being WRITTEN.


I respectfully and wholeheartedly disagree. All of the major plots points were artificial. They kept digging holes for themselves that they couldn't get out of without resorting to cliches or absurdities.

You are willing to suspend your disbelief about the all the nonsenses, but I couldn't. One or two plot holes I could stand, but every scene was ridiculous.

The obstacles that you mentioned were illogical. Why did the zombies all run in a herd to exactly where the protagonists were? Why did Carlyle keep popping up? There was nothing truthful about the film, it was one plot device after another because they had crippled themselves with the foundation. Why was Carlyle different from the other zombies? How did the mother survive? Why wasn't she ripped to pieces like everyone else?

Plot devices. None of the major plot lines make a shred of sense. None of them. They are there to artificially move the plot along.


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Secondly, the filmis BY definition UNCONVENTIONAL in killing its supposed main character. You can't run away from that. That simply just isn't by-the-numbers. At least I've read the wrong books on structure then...


Psycho established that convention many decades ago. Hitchcock used it skillfully, for a particular reason. There is no running away from the fact that its use here was either unintended ie someone wrote an alternative story or simply unneccessary. It didn't add anything to the story, on the contrary it created problems for the film.


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Thirdly, you say not one plot-point made sense in the entire film. Do you really mean that or are you exaggerating your case here? I can't tell. Plenty of plot points made sense. Even one which I know you disagree with made sense; the containment: the shooting of civilians. The fire-bombing made sense too.


The containment in the car park was nonsensical. Is that how a military would protect against a contagious disease, put everyone together?

I think not.

It is completely absurd and illogical. There would be dozens of safe guards to prevent another outbreak.

You know this really. You must do.

This is supposed to be the real world. Think about what would really happen and then you'll realise just how badly conceived everything in the film is. Where are the scientists, the doctors? The international community? Why are they trying to start a new community?

The film is built upon gaping plot holes. Maybe they could have been protecting survivors, but to try and re-establish a colony when there has been an outbreak of such a virulent virus just recently? As I say, absolutely everything in the film is absurd.


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But I think it's sorta funny how much more fervently you hate the movie now, after debating it with me


It just doesn't hold up to any scrutiny and the more you think about it, the worse it gets.

It is probably the worst script ever written. It's worse than that Alien 5 on here.

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Therein lies the difference I suppose.

28 days later was a superb film. This is a by the numbers zombie flick that made no sense.


This was a popcorn flick without anything to say, like Aliens, but as I think I've demonstrated it was hardly by the numbers.




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I respectfully and wholeheartedly disagree. All of the major plots points were artificial. They kept digging holes for themselves that they couldn't get out of without resorting to cliches or absurdities.

You are willing to suspend your disbelief about the all the nonsenses, but I couldn't. One or two plot holes I could stand, but every scene was ridiculous.


The difference being I only thought there were one or two plotholes. Particularly, you seem to be under the impression Andy was a threat during the entire movie, that would naturally be ridiculous, but he wasn't.


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The obstacles that you mentioned were illogical. Why did the zombies all run in a herd to exactly where the protagonists were?


WEll, obviously it wasn't all of the zombies. It was exactly that - a herd. Why is that now absurd? they did that in the first one as well??


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Why did Carlyle keep popping up? There was nothing truthful about the film, it was one plot device after another because they had crippled themselves with the foundation.


We already agree about Carlyle popping up. What about the 15 other points you made that I challenged? I think you've taken a few instances of plotholes and poor plotting and stretched it out to the sensational claim that EVERYTHING in the movie was like that.


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Psycho established that convention many decades ago. Hitchcock used it skillfully, for a particular reason. There is no running away from the fact that its use here was either unintended ie someone wrote an alternative story or simply unneccessary. It didn't add anything to the story, on the contrary it created problems for the film.


There is a difference between PRECEDENCE and CONVENTION. Are you really saying it is conventional, or by the numbers, to kill off your main character after 30 minutes time?

And why is there no running away from 'the fact' that this was unintended or unnecessary? Without having to resort to going into debate about whether or not Carlyle deserved to die, I will say that it stresses the motif of cynicism, that no one is safe. It's like Clemens in Alien 3. Everybody dies.


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The containment in the car park was nonsensical. Is that how a military would protect against a contagious disease, put everyone together?

I think not.

It is completely absurd and illogical. There would be dozens of safe guards to prevent another outbreak.

You know this really. You must do.

This is supposed to be the real world. Think about what would really happen and then you'll realise just how badly conceived everything in the film is.


Oh THINK about it? Gosh, why haven't I thought of that sooner? All this time I've been banging my head against the keyboard, hoping something intelligible would come out, but you're right - thinking is definitely the way.

Sorry about that, but that was really an unnecessarily condescending comment. Naturally I have thought about it; I just don't agree with you.

I agree about the parking garage, I already conceded that point, but you said EVERY plot point. If you don't mean EVERY plot point don't say it. Be precise.


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It just doesn't hold up to any scrutiny and the more you think about it, the worse it gets.


The plotpoints that don't make sense did not ruin everything that did work with this film. Not for me.


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I agree about the parking garage, I already conceded that point, but you said EVERY plot point. If you don't mean EVERY plot point don't say it. Be precise.


I mean every single plot point. Every single one. I've been through most of them and shown how they are absurd. You don't agree, but they are in real terms.

The whole film is illogical. The commune makes no sense as there ae no scientists and they are not following Level 4 containment protocols.

The very idea of starting a new commune in Britain was absurd

The people they chose to start it were absurd, where are the scientists?

The fact that there was only one medic in the commune was absurd

The fcat that it was Americans doing it was absurd

The fact the kids can get out and aren't A) Shot instantly B) Caught instantly is absurd

The fact that the mother is alive is absurd. How did she get away? They just decided to scratch her for fun, then stopped? Did she taste a bit funny? They tear everyone else apart and apparently she couldn't get out.

The way the mother acts in the house is absurd

The fact that she is taken into the commune is absurd

The fact that she isn't quarantined properly is absurd

The fact that There are no guards is absurd

The fact that her husband has access is absurd

The fact he would kiss his wife is absurd

The fact he retains his intelligence once infected is absurd and a contradiction of the films logic

The fact he can so easily disappear is absurd, when there are snipers and cameras on every rough. He is infected isn't he?

The fact he is intelligent enough to know where the door is is absurd.

The fact the door exists is absurd.

The fact the door isn't protected is absurd

The fact that the people are all squeezed in when they are supposed to be protected from an infectious disease is absurd

The fact he can open the door when hundreds of people inside couldn't is absurd.

The fact that they started firing on the innocents without giving them instructions first is absurd (the infected are infected instantly, and couldn't follow any kind of instructions).

You can defend this all you want, but it just wouldn't happen in reality.

The fact that the snipers deliberately target people who clearly aren't infected is absurd, fine if they hit some by accident, but lets at least pretend that this is a real military.

The fact that they don't mobilise their attack choppers or their heavy artillery that we have seen in the film is absurd. It doesn't even have the decency to follow  its own stupid logic.

The fact that the mindless zombies suddenly appear on roof tops is absurd

Again, this is the military isn't it? They've built a safe zone that a child can penetrate and they are incapable of  even locking doors?

The fact that Carlyle follows the group is absurd and remembers his family is absurd.

The fact he has a clear plan is absurd. Why doesn't he mindlessly attack?

The fact that without a car he managed to escape the firebombing is absurd. So what if they said that some survived over the phone? It doesn't disguise the fact it was a huge plot hole, indeed it actually highlights it. Its one of the few that someone picked up on. This is what i mean by plot devices, they use the firebombin to give a timescale to the escape of the main charcaters, but they don't even follow through the films internal logic.


The fact that they cover what is in reality about 10 miles in four minutes on foot , the underground alone is about 5 miles, is absurd.

The fact they went into the underground is absurd. It made no sense it was just for effect, like the rest of the film

The fact that the helicopter wouldn't pick them up anywhere but wembley was absurd

The fact that the tribe of zombies somehow knew where they were was absurd

The way they lay around in the disused fairground was absurd

The way that the chopper pilot wouldn't pick up the civilians was absurd

The fact that they were planning to take Andy to France without first contacting the French was absurd

The fact that it was a Doctor who suggested it was absurd

The fact that a soldier went along with it was absurd. What would the French do if they saw it coming? Blow it out of the sky perhaps?

The way that Carlyle caught up with them was absurd

The way that the chopper pilot took a clearly infected Andy with him was absurd

The ending of the film was absurd.

Those are pretty much all the plot events that I remember. All of them are ridiciulous in their own way. I've never seen anything like it.

I challenge you to find me a script anywhere that has even half the number of plot holes. It's incredible.




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I mean every single plot point. Every single one. I've been through most of them and shown how they are absurd. You don't agree, but they are in real terms.

The whole film is illogical. The commune makes no sense as there ae no scientists and they are not following Level 4 containment protocols.

The very idea of starting a new commune in Britain was absurd

The people they chose to start it were absurd, where are the scientists?

The fact that there was only one medic in the commune was absurd

The fcat that it was Americans doing it was absurd

The fact the kids can get out and aren't A) Shot instantly B) Caught instantly is absurd

The fact that the mother is alive is absurd. How did she get away? They just decided to scratch her for fun, then stopped? Did she taste a bit funny? They tear everyone else apart and apparently she couldn't get out.

The way the mother acts in the house is absurd

The fact that she is taken into the commune is absurd

The fact that she isn't quarantined properly is absurd

The fact that There are no guards is absurd

The fact that her husband has access is absurd

The fact he would kiss his wife is absurd

The fact he retains his intelligence once infected is absurd and a contradiction of the films logic

The fact he can so easily disappear is absurd, when there are snipers and cameras on every rough. He is infected isn't he?

The fact he is intelligent enough to know where the door is is absurd.

The fact the door exists is absurd.

The fact the door isn't protected is absurd

The fact that the people are all squeezed in when they are supposed to be protected from an infectious disease is absurd

The fact he can open the door when hundreds of people inside couldn't is absurd.

The fact that they started firing on the innocents without giving them instructions first is absurd (the infected are infected instantly, and couldn't follow any kind of instructions).

You can defend this all you want, but it just wouldn't happen in reality.

The fact that the snipers deliberately target people who clearly aren't infected is absurd, fine if they hit some by accident, but lets at least pretend that this is a real military.

The fact that they don't mobilise their attack choppers or their heavy artillery that we have seen in the film is absurd. It doesn't even have the decency to follow  its own stupid logic.

The fact that the mindless zombies suddenly appear on roof tops is absurd

Again, this is the military isn't it? They've built a safe zone that a child can penetrate and they are incapable of  even locking doors?

The fact that Carlyle follows the group is absurd and remembers his family is absurd.

The fact he has a clear plan is absurd. Why doesn't he mindlessly attack?

The fact that without a car he managed to escape the firebombing is absurd. So what if they said that some survived over the phone? It doesn't disguise the fact it was a huge plot hole, indeed it actually highlights it. Its one of the few that someone picked up on. This is what i mean by plot devices, they use the firebombin to give a timescale to the escape of the main charcaters, but they don't even follow through the films internal logic.


The fact that they cover what is in reality about 10 miles in four minutes on foot , the underground alone is about 5 miles, is absurd.

The fact they went into the underground is absurd. It made no sense it was just for effect, like the rest of the film

The fact that the helicopter wouldn't pick them up anywhere but wembley was absurd

The fact that the tribe of zombies somehow knew where they were was absurd

The way they lay around in the disused fairground was absurd

The way that the chopper pilot wouldn't pick up the civilians was absurd

The fact that they were planning to take Andy to France without first contacting the French was absurd

The fact that it was a Doctor who suggested it was absurd

The fact that a soldier went along with it was absurd. What would the French do if they saw it coming? Blow it out of the sky perhaps?

The way that Carlyle caught up with them was absurd

The way that the chopper pilot took a clearly infected Andy with him was absurd

The ending of the film was absurd.

Those are pretty much all the plot events that I remember. All of them are ridiciulous in their own way. I've never seen anything like it.

I challenge you to find me a script anywhere that has even half the number of plot holes. It's incredible.






I honestly have no idea how you manage to watch any movie at all if that's the scrutiny you put every one of them through.

In my opinion I already debunked 90% of the things you call "absurd" (an inflated term at this point), and yet you keep bringing them up, so your challenge of finding a script with just half the plotholes is futile since I don't consider your "plotholes" plotholes. I mean, you don't even address the ones I've questioned, you just keep bringing them up without elaboration. You disregard the fact that I've already explained the snipers, that the movie actually SHOWS Carlyle surviving the firebombing (we don't just hear about it) and reiterate that the zombies "knew" where they were when they didn't.

If you were that scrutinous towards all movies then how about the rage virus itself? Isn't that absurd? That's the BASIS of the entire franchise?

I'm sorry, but I can't really take this seriously. It's like you're trying to make up absudities where there are none.



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This movie actually scared me.
Not many movies do that.
If the infected could not run, pfft, no problem.
But these guys run like a (bad word) and that is what makes it scary.
Also, in the parts where the infected just pop up... yeah, that was very disturbing.
But that first scene with the family is what gets me. Very real(ish) and very likely, that is what someone (most people) would do.


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