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Cinquain (currently 1504 views) |
Don |
Posted: March 30th, 2004, 11:07pm |
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LocationVirginia Posts16449 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
A Cinquain is five lines of poetry that follows this pattern
Line 1: 2 syllables One word giving the title. (noun) Line 2: 4 syllables Two words that describe the title. (adjectives) Line 3: 6 syllables Three words that express action. ( Verbs) Line 4: 8 syllables Four words that express feeling. Line 5: 2 syllables One word that gives the title a different name. (synonym)
E.g.,
Fungus Green and slimy Inching across my lawn It is gross and very slippery. Ick |
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Old Time Wesley |
Posted: March 31st, 2004, 3:31pm |
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LocationOntario, Canada Posts2908 Posts Per Day 0.38 |
Umm, this one is a little confusing |
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R.E._Freak |
Posted: April 6th, 2004, 3:32pm |
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This one is tricky It's not at all like haikus Give me five dollars |
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lesleyjl21 |
Posted: April 6th, 2004, 5:34pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts206 Posts Per Day 0.03 |
Children Young and older Playing terrible games Inconsiderate and then some. Boyfriends |
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Rob S. |
Posted: April 6th, 2004, 7:02pm |
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Good one, Lesley. Much better than this one, that I just made up.
Lawyers Rich and richer Talking, fighting, robbing Always hated, always dispised Neighbors
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Don |
Posted: April 6th, 2004, 8:30pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
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Freak, Lesley and Tradition: all good.
Boys Dirty and smelly Running, jumping, swinging I have no peace Monsters
Boys Clean and fragrent Sitting, snuggling, reading Feeling oh, so sleepy Angels |
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lesleyjl21 |
Posted: April 7th, 2004, 1:59am |
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LocationSouthern California Posts206 Posts Per Day 0.03 |
Those are all great. Good job, folks. |
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Rob S. |
Posted: April 7th, 2004, 10:21am |
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I have another one, better than my first one.
Students Broke with no cash Studying and sleeping Desires appreciation Teachers |
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lesleyjl21 |
Posted: April 7th, 2004, 12:30pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts206 Posts Per Day 0.03 |
LOL, ain't that the truth tradition! |
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Rob S. |
Posted: April 8th, 2004, 4:03pm |
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Try this one on for size. It's another one about students.
Student Smart and clever Worries about exams Very nervous about failure Myself
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lesleyjl21 |
Posted: April 8th, 2004, 5:00pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts206 Posts Per Day 0.03 |
That describes me too! It's like you're channeling me... |
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Rob S. |
Posted: April 8th, 2004, 8:08pm |
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Great minds think alike I guess.
I had a tough week so far. The life of a college student. Long, hard, and frustrating. Been so busy, the only things I've written lately are messageboard posts and these cinquains. |
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lesleyjl21 |
Posted: April 9th, 2004, 6:36pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts206 Posts Per Day 0.03 |
It's true about the great minds thinking alike... But at least you're writing something, tradition. Been a lax first week back from spring break for me. I'm sure next week will be more intense. Have been trying to keep the writing muscles flexed, but my head's all over the place at the minute, so I'm hanging in there. Hope you are too. |
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Rob S. |
Posted: April 9th, 2004, 11:29pm |
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I am. I just keep telling myself that slow progress is still progress. My girlfriend also helps me keep things into perspective. She's the best.
Meanwhile, I keep writing short poems for the entertainment of all.
Kitten Small and precious Constantly watching me Very curious about life Children |
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akkira |
Posted: May 28th, 2004, 5:18am |
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girls cute but deadly always watching there back constantly barking up the wrong tree puppies |
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