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ginamaxwell
Posted: July 22nd, 2004, 5:50pm Report to Moderator
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It's refreshing to read something that not only comes to life off of the page but also keeps you guessing until the very end.  I thought it was well written and it made me look forward to seeing the film.
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Wes???  Did you finish the script?
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Well I'm well into the script, just haven't said anything about it yet haha

A few thing I just thought off, it takes a little while to get interesting again after the first scene. The devil stuff felt like Hugo from The Matrix with his Mr. Anderson, not a bad thing but certainly makes it a little odd


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After the opening scene, we take some time to fill out the main and supporting characters and their relationships.  I feel like it's important to do this in order to support, as well as explain, the things that happen later in the story.  Hopefully that doesn't get too boring.  
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