Thanks George for reading this.  I appreciate the comments.

The reason I put "She lost the baby," is because Sam pulls back the sheets to see the bed covered in blood.  How else am I suppose to relay the message that this is because she lost the baby?  Dialouge wounldn't work because it is the climax and irrelevent dialouge would only chop it up.  Once again, I could have left this out but I wanted to make a point that his negligence caused his family's death.

T.I.N.