I kind of liked dumb ol' Ned.
I didn't think the story was that funny, but it had comedic moments.
The story was, however, cute. It had a nice feel to it until that grim ending.
I wish when Ned pulled the trigger, we would have heard CLICK.
The font was weird as mentioned. Back to the woods...
Bucky should have lived.  Bucky was cool.  A little messed up, but I like messed up.
Hmm, I wish ol' Ned would have done the heroic thing and saved Bucky.
Maybe even taken a bullet for the poor critter.
Such is life.

I liked your premise however I was really lost on this one. I felt like every new shot we skipped some part of the story or just 20 minutes.

You could have been a little more descriptive with the hunters. Particularly Ned.

One thing I enjoyed was how you had the hunter (Ned) and the hunted (Bucky) both be equally as clueless to what was going on. Otherwise I was just lost.

I'm with everyone who said Bucky shouldn't have got it. I reckon when Ned raises his gun to shoot Bucky, a shot rings out, but it's the guy who Ned got earlier getting his revenge and Bucky (finally grasping the magnitude of the situation) runs to safety.  

As it stands it was well written. I thought the main characters were interesting. I also thought you squeezed a fair bit into four pages. Well done. If it had a happy ending it would have been even better. 7/10

Hey, Mr. K. Slagle - you’ve got some explaining to do. How could you do that to poor, defenseless Bucky?

Yours gets my vote for most disturbing -- haha.

K. Slagle

I don't think I know you but you've got a great idea with this script..

Well done..


Kevan

I have no idea who you are K. Slagle, but I hope you become a member and start to participate on this board.

If nothing else, I 'd like to give you a hard time for killing Bambi...uhh, Bucky.

Just kidding, nice job.