Quoted from Zack H It would have been funny if Elmo turned out to be Vaders partner.

That's a good point actually.  I agree.

Or even if somehow Elmo helped Takashi. I will have to read over the original draft and see what kind of changes I can make.

As always thanks Heretic (If you want me to read something, drop me a PM) and Zack, I'll try to read them by the end of this weekend as my PC keeps turning itself off. Then my external hard drive died haha now I'm just having problem after problem.

Anyway I always have my laptop.

No rush. Just do it when you get a chance.

Zack

Hey Wes,

I had a little trouble getting into this because I’m not a fan of Beavis and Butthead or Star Wars.  In fact I've never seen any of the Star Wars movies that Yoda was in. However, thanks to my two young sons, I am familiar with the works of Elmo. Lol.

What I liked about this script was that it was professionally done, but it didn't take it self too seriously. I thought the Michael Jackson stuff was pretty funny, especially the Man puppet line, and perhaps Michael had a point, after all Elmo said he liked it in the bum earlier in the piece. Lol.

I also enjoyed the George Lucas scene and thought Takashi's lines to him, after deciding not to kill him, were the best in the script.

You obviously had a lot of fun writing this one and it came through in the writing.