The Purple Elephant by Samuel Capper - Short, Drama - Casey loves her purple elephant, an imaginary friend called Jelly. But everything isn't quite as it seems… 8 pages - pdf format

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Did kind of guess where it was heading but liked it all the same. Just a few things to improve on...

gunna should be gonna.

Come on Jelly, i know a great game we can play... (always three remember)

Headings should read...

                 INT. SITTING ROOM - DAY

Overall, easy to understand and emotional so well done. I did a short story a while back called Pink Primate about a girl with an imaginary friend but it was more of the horror genre. The girl's father doesn't like her having an imaginary friend (pink gorilla in a tu-tu named Betsy). Years later he discovers it's stalking him at the school he works at. Might revisit it in the future and flesh it out more.