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Posted: September 30th, 2024, 8:25pm Report to Moderator
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Judgement Day by Mandarine  - Short, Drama - A man who is judged for his actions on earth. This judgment is based on a question-and-answer test. This man will be divided between lying and going to heaven, or telling the truth and risking hell. 15 pages

Production:A white room with chairs, tables, etc., Casting: Two adult men, one woman (or a female voice) and a few extras - pdf format

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Dear Mandarine,
although some of the interview has to feature telling - there are reasons to SHOW as flashbacks (seemingly misdirectional ones) what's occurring. If the theme is "everyone lies" you could foreshadow this a tad before.
Spellcheck as I'm sure this would also flag up joined words and punctuation errors. Best JtF
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