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I Bet by Simon Parker - Short, Dramedy - A bookworm is told by her mother to get their gambling addict father into rehab by the end of the day or lose what she loves most in the world, reading her books. 8 pages - pdf format

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Couldn't get into this. Nothing to really grab hold of. There is of course gamblers anonymous, but here it is just stated as rehab. Too generic. Delve into it some more. Flush out the characters. Has potential for a light family short, or perhaps more serious. Just needs more meat on the bone.
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