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Posted: July 1st, 2021, 5:22am Report to Moderator
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I Wouldn't Touch That by Meik V. Fischer - Short, Horror - Two kids on a beach and a washed up sea creature. What can go wrong? 10 pages - pdf format

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The title is cool.

Here are the lines I like best: "Like I don't have a stick" and "Come look, I just crushed something."

I had a little trouble following the action on page 9 when the kid threatens to "throw" the creature in the water. It seems like he is really trying to fling or slingshot it into the water using the stick.

I like this. Budget might be high to make this one.
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