So finally Arnie met Sandy and they lived happily ever after. Lol. Cool script. Funny.
Here are the few things I've observed.
Oh, no... I’m out of deodorant!
I would get rid of this first line. It's not needed. Just show Arnold picking up the deodorant can and it's empty. He makes a face and throws it in the dustbin.
"Wild man! Mandy's gonna love it." This will give readers a better clue that Arnold and Mandy have met before.
His smile dissipates when notices she’s holding a bucket in
one hand and bloody machete in the other. Blood is smeared
on her hands, a few feathers are stuck to her.
You can play with this situation by not showing feathers.
Brandi was an interesting character. I wish you would have given her more space than Mandy.
I laughed my head off at that monkey dialogue.
Somehow Arnold was continuously reminding me of Rick Moranis.
Well written. Loved it!