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Hey Dave,

Thanks very much for the thoughts! I think you're right about the Abigail and Joseph dialogue, although I want it to be somewhat schmaltzy. But I agree with you that the information you're wondering about would be good to add.

I'll think about how to change up the security guard -- maybe "suspicion" is not the right word. Thanks!


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