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The Voice of a Generation by Stephen Hoover - Short, Mockumentary - The partly fictionalized story of a '60s folksinger and his heavily fictionalized impact on a completely fictionalized world. 15 pages - pdf, format
To start off, all the camera shots should be taken out of the script.
Also, you have CONTINUE on all of your pages, but that's the least of your problems.
I have no problem with voiceovers, but man oh man, all the dialouge (it looks like) is the narrator. Speaking of the narrator, why does he not have a name? It is hard for me to believe that his actual name is Narrator. I have no clue whether that is intentional or not, but it doesn't look right.
After reading a few pages, the narrator (I guess that's his name) gets a bit too much. I have no clue what is happening in the story, and right now, I just don't care.
One thing that I do love a lot is your title. That is the reason I started to read, you had a good title. Unfortunately, the rest of the script is just not very good.
Stephen, this is simply hilarious! A wonderful hybrid of Monty Python, Woody Allen and Christopher Guest. I laughed so hard I almost peed myself. This HAS to be made, and I would love to be the narrator.
I can't wait to print his and have my wife read it.
To start off, all the camera shots should be taken out of the script.
Also, you have CONTINUE on all of your pages, but that's the least of your problems.
I have no problem with voiceovers, but man oh man, all the dialouge (it looks like) is the narrator. Speaking of the narrator, why does he not have a name? It is hard for me to believe that his actual name is Narrator. I have no clue whether that is intentional or not, but it doesn't look right.
After reading a few pages, the narrator (I guess that's his name) gets a bit too much. I have no clue what is happening in the story, and right now, I just don't care.
You do realize that it's a mockumentary, right?
Down in the hole / Jesus tries to crack a smile / Beneath another shovel load