108 pages is a lot longer than the listed 34 pages.
I love theatre. I grew up in the theatre. If I was an art director and this came across my desk, I'd say "pass" only because it's not formatted as a manuscript should be. I have no idea how long the play would really be because it's not formatted as it should be.
I like the idea of it. I respect the effort it takes to write a play.
As it is, though, it's difficult to read.