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Don
Posted: March 19th, 2016, 7:03am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Racing Cars by Tony Campbell & Maurice Hutchinson - Short, Drama - A young man who hates being touched finds freedom in running. 14 pages - pdf, format


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I guess this is either an unfinished script or was not downloaded in it's entirety.


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Aaargh! Thanks Chris, I hadn't realised. The uploaded version was actually just a brief sample from my website. I'll try to get the full version uploaded. What's the best way to change the version? Any advice would be greatly appreciated!
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Don has very kindly rectified my silly mistake and the real version should now be available.
Thanks Don!
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Tony,

Nice work.  You take an autistic kid who lives to run and give him a life.  I like it.  I'm not sure about the race.  You can't win by going backwards.  But I like the idea.  Good job.  Some nits about formatting.  Needs a good edit, but on the whole, well done.

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Richard
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Tony,

Good job on your script. It was a very good read. What I liked in particular was your dialogue. It came across as very natural and never felt wooden. I also like the way you described scenes, especially during the  beginning. The end was pretty cool as well. Good work.

Matthew Lincoln

P.S. I'd appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on a short I wrote called "The Courier". It's a neo-noir film about 24 pages long. Thanks.
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