Dead Space by Luis Filipe Araujo - Horror, Sci Fi - In the distant future, a rescue team has the mission to discover what happened to the largest space mining ship after it lost its signal. However, the truth becomes frightening as they advance in deep space. 133 pages - pdf, format

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I read into this a few weeks ago.

Title and parts of the logline "what happened to the largest space mining ship after it lost its signal" sound cool.

Whatever, you direct the page here and take a lot of production decisions, in case of terms as well as the way the script is written. I guess you're a fan of this video game and just wanted to bang this out. Whatever, if you like to do it right once, you need to take back a little and write actively what the characters do, and nothing else.