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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Unproduced Screenplay Discussion    Drama Scripts  ›  Alanah's Love Moderators: bert
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Posted: May 12th, 2017, 5:09pm Report to Moderator

So, what are you writing?

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Alanah's Love by Bernard Mersier - Drama - Pain is the only pleasure a woman knows, torturing and killing unsuspecting men. 110 pages - pdf, format

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Don  -  March 28th, 2018, 5:19pm
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I would lose the Watermark - it really distracts from the read - maybe it's just me

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Posted: May 13th, 2017, 8:31pm Report to Moderator

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Hey Bernard,

I agree with Dave, get rid of the watermark, it does distract from reading.
Remove "final version" from page1, protect your script by either Writers Guild or Copyright.

I only read a couple of pages. Your play with words are good, but maybe too many details for a screenplay.

I'll read more if you show up.

Logline is somewhat intriguing.


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