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The Silence Of Running Water by Curt Dennis - Short, Horror - A woman unknowingly plays a murderous, haunted record that steals sounds. 5 pages - pdf format

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Hey Curt,

This would be a fun project for an audio person. I'd like to hear how the noises would sound like as they play from the record player. For a short horror, it was fun and entertaining.

However, how did Lina get the record? She just had a party, but we don't know what kind, so I'm thinking it was just a house/dinner party. It would make more sense if it were, say, a birthday party for her and she got the record as a gift. Maybe she likes collecting records and so a friend gave one to her for her birthday. Just something to make more sense than for her to stumble upon this record she's never seen before in her own collection.

Otherwise, I enjoyed this, and I like your writing style.


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Hey Curt,

This would be a fun project for an audio person. I'd like to hear how the noises would sound like as they play from the record player. For a short horror, it was fun and entertaining.

However, how did Lina get the record? She just had a party, but we don't know what kind, so I'm thinking it was just a house/dinner party. It would make more sense if it were, say, a birthday party for her and she got the record as a gift. Maybe she likes collecting records and so a friend gave one to her for her birthday. Just something to make more sense than for her to stumble upon this record she's never seen before in her own collection.

Otherwise, I enjoyed this, and I like your writing style.

Thanks mate! Yeah we definitely sort of brushed past her backstory with this (even though myself and Max, my co-writer, talked about it a lot).

Fortunately, I think it would out as we're in post-production on this (and we're gonna continue with it so the feedback isn't going unwarranted- it's going into the next one!)
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