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Don
Posted: August 12th, 2019, 12:19pm Report to Moderator
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Ripple Effect by Frank MacCrory - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy - The invention of time travel might change history, but it won't change the fact that Humphries would do anything to save his king. 8 pages

A fixed-up version of Unforeseen Changes from week 5 of the Writer's Tournament - pdf format

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Hey Frank....

I loved the previous one. This one is not much changed except for some dialogues and time jump near the end.

I was expecting the answer to why that technician changed just in 20 minutes' time traveling. But I guess, that's a bigger picture. Would love to read an extended version of this if you have any plans for that.

Great job as always.
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This was am amazing read. I aspire to write at such a level. Great work. It could work well for a longer piece too, I was deeply invested the whole time.
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