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Posted: August 13th, 2019, 9:29am Report to Moderator

So, what are you writing?

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Portal by Chaitanya - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy - This story's main goal is to give a message to all that how man is using earths resources and how earths resources are depleting. A sci-fi concept called parallel universe is used to pack this message in a more suspense and in a entertaining way and this scripts float on the narrative board.the story basically revolves around three characters but it turns out to be that there are actually 6 characters in the film including the characters in the parallel universe. 14 pages - pdf format

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There are many format errors and typos. Just in the first few lines as an example:

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Wrong format. Should be:


Read some scripts - do some Google research on format - there is a lot of structure stuff you need to get down.

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