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Posted: February 14th, 2004, 10:57pm Report to Moderator
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The First Christmas by Matt Green - Drama - Based on the amazing true story of German and British soldiers who dropped their weapons, walked across No Man's Land, and declared an unofficial truce during the Christmas Holiday of 1914.  - html** format.


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Any comments would be appreciated.  I actually just went over and finished a second draft taking into considerations much of the comments from the coverage I recieved from different companies.

Dont hold anything back ladies and gentlemen.
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I really liked it personally
you did some good work there, unlike the other scripts posted that same day.
not mentioning any names....*coughcoughcoughfate2coughcoughcough

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He wanted to talk.  I wanted to shoot.
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Quoted from TheParadoxicalShaman, posted February 15th, 2004, 9:32pm at here
I really liked it personally
you did some good work there, unlike the other scripts posted that same day.
not mentioning any names....*coughcoughcoughfate2coughcoughcough

ahem
pardon me


Thank you, that actually makes me feel a lot better.  So far I have recieved "consider" coverage across the board.  Im attempting to refine it based on the notes I recieved in order to get the coveted "recommend" from them.

I would very much like to hear some more replies.  Hopefully Don can post a link in the Unproduced section, since there seems to be much more traffic there.
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Posted: February 19th, 2004, 2:39pm Report to Moderator
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that was a great read.  Thought it was very well written, very descriptive and very imaginative.  Really enjoyed it, some of the best creative writing I have seen so far.
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Quoted from bez, posted February 19th, 2004, 2:39pm at here
that was a great read.  Thought it was very well written, very descriptive and very imaginative.  Really enjoyed it, some of the best creative writing I have seen so far.


Thank you, that means a great deal to me.

I have actually made a bunch of revisions, added some good dialogue, etc and am getting ready to (hopefully) go somewhere with it.
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