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I can rarely work out who wrote what but I'm thinking Dustin for I Dream Of The Devil based on his comment on that script. It could be though that he just really likes it, if so I'm stumped.
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Dance for the Devil - An easy-to-produce short says 'Warren' to me.
No idea at all on the rest. Especially the top 6 scripts. There are so many good writers here, they could be written by any one of them.
My script was not very well received this time around, but I wrote it fairly quickly in a total of approximately four hours - in between a major rewrite of an audio play adaptation, two short screenplays, and a monologue. So, there's my excuse.
As soon as the deadline was up, I've been at a loose end since. Nothing to do. Typical.
Didn't read them all (only got to 19) - but based my gut says:
Read What You Sow - Warren Libertine or Stowaway - Paul The Gathering - Jeff.
Only because of this:
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And then, you've got 3 misspellings of "lightning"! Really? I could have sworn there was lightning early on...let's see...yeah, OK, you spelled it right on Page 1, fucked it up here somehow. No biggie.
It didn't sound like a Jeff review to me: Why would anyone catch a typo and then go back and see if that word was spelled wrong on other places and then say the typo was no biggie here because you spelled it right before - The Jeff I know would have said - Learn how to spell lightening! Way to many typos!
But then I see the dreaded two-lined wrylie at the end. That can't be Jeff - right?? Christ, it could have only been worse if the second line of the wrylie was an orphan. Is Jeff playing games with me....?
Okay, I'm done with reading and reviewing. Only skipped a review on one script, and that's because I just can't think of a single thing to add.
Pretty good group of scripts. No single standout for me... only gave one the top score, and that was reluctant because I didn't think the script finished well.
No guesses as to who wrote what.
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I mean nothing bad about that one, and I'm quite sure I said the writer had serious talent.
If not you, DJS. I just see you going for an over the top presentation.
Jack, I remember you and I KNOW you're a very good writer. Hope you know that.
This made me laugh - so thanks. Yes - you said the writer had serious talent
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I can't do it. No fucking way can I read another 6 pages. I'm sorry, but this has got to be the single most offensive scripts I've ever seen, in terms of the writing. The 6 pages I read feel like 10 or more. No character has any character. So little has happened.
Not sure how anyone could construe that not to be a compliment.
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