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Grandma Bear
Posted: April 28th, 2019, 8:25pm Report to Moderator
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I am 99.99% sure who wrote The Libertine, but I won't say that here. The writer denies it, but I'm still sure.  

Other than that one, there are three that I know 100% who wrote them, but that's it. Beyond these, I have no clue.  


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Quoted from Dreamscale
I dream of the Devil - Dustin

Stowaway - Bert

Libertine - Paul or Rene

Tiillinghaust 1944 - Jack


You assume I wrote your absolute least favorite script with a one star rating?  Hmm.  We've come a long way since 2007.  

I won't deny nor will I accept this answer.    
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Dreamscale
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You assume I wrote your absolute least favorite script with a one star rating?  Hmm.  We've come a long way since 2007.  

I won't deny nor will I accept this answer.    


I mean nothing bad about that one, and I'm quite sure I said the writer had serious talent.

If not you, DJS.  I just see you going for an over the top presentation.

Jack, I remember you and I KNOW you're a very good writer.  Hope you know that.


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Ooh, I see we're guessing and it's been okayed.

But no revealing yet!

So... I haven't read them all, and I also haven't a clue.

The reveals will be very interesting, especially: Stowaway.


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I can rarely work out who wrote what but I'm thinking Dustin for I Dream Of The Devil based on his comment on that script. It could be though that he just really likes it, if so I'm stumped.


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DustinBowcot
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Dance for the Devil - An easy-to-produce short says 'Warren' to me.

No idea at all on the rest. Especially the top 6 scripts. There are so many good writers here, they could be written by any one of them.

My script was not very well received this time around, but I wrote it fairly quickly in a total of approximately four hours - in between a major rewrite of an audio play adaptation, two short screenplays, and a monologue. So, there's my excuse.

As soon as the deadline was up, I've been at a loose end since. Nothing to do. Typical.
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Quoted from DustinBowcot
Dance for the Devil - An easy-to-produce short says 'Warren' to me.


I did always used to go into OWC's with production in mind, but I've stopped doing that with my more recent entries, so it's definitely not mine.

They're good for getting a film made but not so good for getting a mug


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Quoted from Warren
I did always used to go into OWC's with production in mind, but I've stopped doing that with my more recent entries, so it's definitely not mine.

They're good for getting a film made but not so good for getting a mug

Ah, you going for a set of mugs, Warren?  



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Warren
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Ah, you going for a set of mugs, Warren?  



Well at least a friend for my other one, it looks so lonely on the shelf by its self.


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I hardly know anyone here - but I'll throw out a few guesses...

Gondolier - Anthony Cawood
The Libertine - Dustin
Reap what you sow - Warren
Ganglers - Mark Renshaw
It's Coming - PKCardinal

I was also going to say Jeff for The Gathering - maybe the double line wyrlie is to throw us off the scent


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Didn't read them all (only got to 19) - but based my gut says:

Read What You Sow - Warren
Libertine or Stowaway - Paul
The Gathering - Jeff.

Only because of this:


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And then, you've got 3 misspellings of "lightning"!  Really?  I could have sworn there was lightning early on...let's see...yeah, OK, you spelled it right on Page 1, fucked it up here somehow.  No biggie.


It didn't sound like a Jeff review to me: Why would anyone catch a typo and then go back and see if that word was spelled wrong on other places and then say the typo was no biggie here because you spelled it right before - The Jeff I know would have said  - Learn how to spell lightening! Way to many typos!

But then I see the dreaded two-lined wrylie at the end. That can't be Jeff - right?? Christ, it could have only been worse if the second line of the wrylie was an orphan. Is Jeff playing games with me....?

Yes. So - Jeff, for future scripts:

This:


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(turns his hands
into a fist)


Can be a one line wrylie

(makes a fist)


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TheUsualSuspect
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When is the voting deadline?


A Picture Is Worth

If you want me to read your script, send me a link.
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Quoted from TheUsualSuspect
When is the voting deadline?


May 3rd.


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Okay, I'm done with reading and reviewing. Only skipped a review on one script, and that's because I just can't think of a single thing to add.

Pretty good group of scripts. No single standout for me... only gave one the top score, and that was reluctant because I didn't think the script finished well.

No guesses as to who wrote what.


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The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature
Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature

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Quoted from Dreamscale


I mean nothing bad about that one, and I'm quite sure I said the writer had serious talent.

If not you, DJS.  I just see you going for an over the top presentation.

Jack, I remember you and I KNOW you're a very good writer.  Hope you know that.



This made me laugh - so thanks. Yes - you said the writer had serious talent


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I can't do it.  No fucking way can I read another 6 pages.  I'm sorry, but this has got to be the single most offensive scripts I've ever seen, in terms of the writing.  The 6 pages I read feel like 10 or more.  No character has any character.  So little has happened.


Not sure how anyone could construe that not to be a compliment.

PS - you do know we don't write the comments in Snap Chat


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