lol. Thank you Sandra. In a sense, school work helped. It actually made me enjoy my writing time some more.

Glad you liked it!

--Julio

Absolutely Julio!

The pit of snakes, the dissent among Shiva's followers is the perfect descent into the mystery that is Shiva.

You wrote Piscovirus as neither extremely helpful, but not entirely bad either.

When we're through with this first run, it will be interesting to go deeper into this lovely little snake pit.

P.Ssssss I tried to buy a snake totem the other day in honor of Shiva and they were fresh out of snakes.    

Sandra

Wow, nice Julio.  Lots of new twists all of a sudden.  Crazy stuff.  I agree with Sandra that there are some edits, but wow, this thing has taken a big twist.  Occultists, gun fights, and pits of snakes...and even a "swan dive" into said pit of snakes! YES!  Ayyyee!!!

I agree that Colin had to go. He wasn't doing much (no offense, Mr. Cornetto!).

Glad that "the scream" is now being remembered...it's a good visual.

But...how deep was that pit?  How'd Colin not instantly get totally fucked up?  And does our newest snake-girl now have super powers, with that swan dive into said pit?

Overall, I liked it Julio.  Nice job in getting the school work and Shiva project done!

That's what I'm talking about...

The Pit was relatively big, but not *too* deep in snakes. Colin would've died in seconds if that were the case. Enough snakes to soften Cordelia's fall, but not enough for someone to drown in them.

Cordelia has no superpowers per se, just occassional "reptile-like" abilities. I'm trying to hint that, the more you use them, the more *it* takes over you, which might give a clue about John aka Piscivorus too.

--Julio

Tracksheet is updated

Emails are sent

Snake's in the grass

AAAAAGHHH!!!

I have to admit folks I got been caught up with the OWC and never checked out the Shiva thread since Friday. The last post I read was Yohn talking about not having killed anyone. I have just this minute found out that he went back and killed me! Both brothers dead, what a disaster. I am in mourning.

Serves me right for not keeping tabs on the game, better pay attention from now on.

Hey Cornetto, updated, yes, but you have Albert and Bruce as being up next...they're dead...we're all dead!  The fucking world is falling down on us...we're all dead!!!!

jayrex is up next and I copy and paste so it should actually be jayrex/Piscovirus.  Can't do anything about Bruce though.

Hey, guys sorry for being late on this one as everyone was early. Been trying to make this scene good. I'll hopefully have it up by tomorrow night. No ifs ands or buts.

Quoted from Dreamscale Hey Cornetto, updated, yes, but you have Albert and Bruce as being up next...they're dead...we're all dead!  The fucking world is falling down on us...we're all dead!!!!

Not me. I got reincarnated with a split personality.

I think Jayrex is a bit bogged down right now. He wrote me awhile back, but I haven't heard back of late.

Sandra

Quoted from Sandra Elstree. I think Jayrex is a bit bogged down right now. He wrote me awhile back, but I haven't heard back of late.

This true, I have too much on my plate, scripts, reading, creating, and can I pencil in a date for Valkyrie, aswell as not having to worry about looking for a job come 26th Feb.  I'm in the wrong industry.  Stress is going to get the better of me.

Anyway, I've sent Sandra a proposed idea of mine.  I'll keep thinking and thinking and hopefully I'll have something workable to pass to Sandra.

Wish me luck.

I know you'll do GREAT Jayrex...it's a stressful time for many...so know that you are not alone and that we understand. ;o

Quoted from jayrex This true, I have too much on my plate, scripts, reading, creating, and can I pencil in a date for Valkyrie, aswell as not having to worry about looking for a job come 26th Feb.  I'm in the wrong industry.  Stress is going to get the better of me. Anyway, I've sent Sandra a proposed idea of mine.  I'll keep thinking and thinking and hopefully I'll have something workable to pass to Sandra. Wish me luck.

You are wished tons of luck!!! It's very hard. No matter how good we may be at multi-tasking. We can still only do one thing at a time.

Sandra

Don't worry jayrex. things soon will turn around. . I'm done. Just sent it off to Julio to check. Now, waiting.