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Dude, no E-Mail from you...send to jeffbush3@cox.net
You've spent your entire life on this story and script? How old are you?
Only 1 film in history is close to what you're writing? WOW...amazing!
You've got to get this thing done so we can all read it.
Send me a script!!!!!
Jeff, calm down. I see that you are getting a little mad right now, but just relax and I will send you the script again. When I said I spent my entire life on the script and story, I didn't mean it literally. My age happens to be 18, but I am much more mature than most 18 year olds.
And yes, even though it is hard to believe, only 1 film in history is close to what I am writing. This film that I talk about is one I have watched many times and use many of its elements in the script I am currently writing.
I am about to send you another copy of a short script I wrote. Please relax Jeff and try to take it down a notch.
I have no clue who or what Baltis is, but I am certainly not Baltis. You can give me feedback on that script anytime you want Jeff. I might not be on in a few hours, but for most of the day I will be on here and working on my script (which is almost to 70 pages).
Finally, don't cling too religiously to what you've written. It sounds like you're very attached to what you have and are quite afraid of ruining it by changing it. This plays into the backup suggestion. When I start making significant changes on a script, I save the previous version as a different file (I usually save the existing version as the name of the script with the date behind it, so I know when I decided to keep that version), and then go to town, knowing that if I stray too far, I can pull up the old version and just copy it back in.
So don't be afraid to tear apart your own work, but just back up the old version and never touch it. This might help you to try different avenues of getting your script to do what you want it to do without affecting what you've already done.
I completely agree with this advice. I do the same thing, often writing multiple scenes, versions etc. The important thing is to save them. Sometimes I like to label the file with a key word that helps me distinguish it later on. Because what happens after awhile is you get tons of dates behind the name of your script and you don't know which version is which. It's pretty funny.
I have to laugh, Usaking, (sorry my dear - I'm just funnin' you) but you're telling Jeff to calm down and you're the one who is actually sweating over his work.
I think we all can get pretty serious about things, maybe too much sometimes.
First off, I am not sweating over anyones work. In fact, I am probably the most calmest guy on the planet. If you knew me very well, you would know this. It just sounds to me like people are starting to get angry about things that have nothing to do with me or who I am. I am trying, painfully, to finish writing my script and post it on this site when it is done. It is hard to do this while people are screaming at you like their is no tomorrow.
Secondly, I am starting to think you are pulling a joke or prank on me Jeff. I have sent you 2 copies of the same short script already and you have not gotten both. I copied and pasted your email, like you said, and sent them to that exact one.
Dude, no one is screaming at you, and I am defintely not pulling a joke on you. No E-Mail has come through from you. What is your E-mail? I'll send you one and you can simply reply.
It sounds like people are screaming at me, but if you say so. My email is yugioh_yugioh@hotmail.com (Yes, I know it is a weird email but it used to belong to a friend of mine).
The best thing to do is probably for usaking to post a few pages of the script he’s working on here in this thread and have a moderator move the whole thread to the Work in Progress section.
This is starting to really upset me a lot. Jeff, for some reason I can't email you and you can't email me. I don't think the script will fit in the message box because it will be to big to fit it all in. Instead of going through all of this, I would rather just finish my script (which is almost done) and then post it on the site and you will be able to read it, Jeff. That way I can make any corrections I need to and not have to go through all of this.
Breanne, I am not ever going to post an unfinished script on this site. It would not only be inappropriate, but very rude to the other people as well
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It's pretty funny. 