Andrew

I too was appalled all the way to the end... then I found myself laughing my ass off. Good job. Writing with a raw emotion can be abrasive and get people talking.. then who knows it may propel you to new hights, like maybe the top of your phone booth.

I am looking forward to more chronicles. Maybe one where he is talking to the suidice prevention line... then  he suddenly gets some chewing gum in his mouth that was stuck to the reciever. Yuck! In the end he kills himself because of one last straw (the gum) that spun him out.  He smashed the phone handle over his head until he crushes his skull and lays bleeding to death at the bottom of the phone booth. Have the kid see this and scream.

Spencer

I'm afraid I have to go with Breanne here. It's like a running gag, but unfortunately I knew what was going on before after the initial hello. It's an old joke.

Sorry!

Haha this reminds me of a script I wrote called "The End" the premise was it was the end of the world and it was a couple who were spending their last few moments again.

The entire script was written as a drama, and it ended with the two embraced and the boyfriend leans in and says "I missed your sister." I wrote it for a creative writing course.

This was alright, kind of dragged out, but I got a kick out of it.

I'm not a big fan of these shorter scripts that have been popping up lately. They aren't stories, just situations and this one is no exception. I think this would fit better on eBaumsworld than it does here because it's really rather pointless.

O...Oh wow...Andrew...

*dials psychiatrist number*

Just kidding, but wow, I did get a laught at the end, but seriously, you did get me. The first time I thought he was talking to his friend who was a guy, and then I thought it was his girlfriend, and then, I finally knew who he was talking too and that was the end of the film.

Bra...Bravo, Andrew

Sean