This wasn't a laugh out loud funny for me unlike the other one but your story overall is more tighter and your writing is better.

Comedy is never an easy genre.

Good job

Missed It by That Much

Short notes: Put a secret agent in a fighter jet and making it funny, check. To me, hardest topic after - only lying in a supermarket. Of course the goal here should be to produce a sketch or something that can be done with a jet cabin and green screen. Then the exterior shots of twirling jet etc could be made by some cgi guys in that trashy but self-aware way as they usually do it in those evening/night comedy shows. So, partly very funny. Protag works very well. Only negative was that you had two people on the radio talking from the off. You produce a lot of jokes from it, well-crafted, but I have my personal opinion about too much passive style triggered screenwriting where you paint a picture from somewhere else through words instead of having it in front, live. However, cannot expect much more here regarding the subject and, well, making it funny same time. Also liked the stupidity of the ending. It's absolutely how you go out of those kind of flicks. Now back to Jimmy Fallon…

story (0-5): 3

character (0-5): 4

presentation (0-5): 4

total: 11