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Don
Posted: July 24th, 2006, 8:27pm Report to Moderator
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Things of Life by Helio J Cordeiro - Short - The simple things of life can hurt even sensitive feelings. 10 pages - pdf, format


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Helio you're incredible! I seriously want to know where you come up with this kind of stuff! You've had me fooled before and you just fooled me another time! Though I kind of expected the ending, but still, I was kind of....disgusted at the beginning, but in a good way!

I like it how this whole script was about two guys who were having a conversation about...


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bisexual dogs going at it....

There were some spelling and grammar mistakes, but I'm going to let someone else go into that. But Helio, no matter how odd and disturbing this script was, I give it five stars!

Seriously, though, where do you come up with this kind of stuff?


Sean "the sadist"


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darthbrion
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I'm seriously troubled.....

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dude - hilarious

sick & twisted sure - yet hilarious

like Sean said, some typos here and there but it didn't distract that much from a very odd story.

great read!  
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Helio
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Better to die with vodka than with tedium!

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Hey guys, thanks a lot for your comments! I really appreciated and I will fix the typos etc.
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Hello mi amigo!

Very weird story, as usual. I was wondering from the start "What the f*ck Phil and Robin are doing? Are they fags too?" Well, I haven't been disappointed at all.

Good work Helio

Michel


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as Michel said I als thought there was something going on first!

not dissapointed as usual by your work Helio!

good, funny draft!


Scripts :
- Hot Road (short)
- The Mirror (short)
- Listen Up (short)
- Dawn (short)
- One Day (short)
- Steal (short)

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Write NOW! Perfect LATER!

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Heilo

Great story buddy. You knocked my socks off again. I think every script gets better and better for you.

Spencer McDonald


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Helio
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Pedro, Michel and Spencer, I appreciated you comments, fellas!
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