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The Award Goes To... (currently 2488 views) |
Don |
Posted: September 17th, 2006, 2:51pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts16438 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
The Award Goes To… by Helio J Corderio - Short - Not just the universe and Hollywood is flooded by lots of stars, heads beaten as well! 14 pages - pdf, format |
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------------- You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take. - Wayne Gretzky
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Mr.Z |
Posted: September 17th, 2006, 3:22pm |
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Been Around
LocationBuenos Aires - Argentina Posts743 Posts Per Day 0.11 |
Is that really necessary, Don? Another crazy addition to your collection, Helio my friend. Can't bust you about anything because I feel like this short accomplishes everything that it intends to. Nothing more, nothing less. Gotta love the simply cameos, those were the highlights of this one. |
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Helio |
Posted: September 18th, 2006, 6:14am |
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Old Timer Better to die with vodka than with tedium!
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Hey Don, maby my new name "Corderio" is a type of numerology's thing that can bring me luck!
Z, my amigo, I'd like to say in public thank for your great help with this piece. The simply cameos are ever the highlights everywhere they appear. |
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michel |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 2:09am |
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Old Timer
LocationFrance Posts1156 Posts Per Day 0.18 |
Mon ami Helio, just one thing to say "We love you, nuts". Michel |
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rpedro |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 5:00am |
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funny thing! I'm liking the adventures of those lizards! keep on going! |
| Scripts : - Hot Road (short) - The Mirror (short) - Listen Up (short) - Dawn (short) - One Day (short) - Steal (short)
Pedro Chaves
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dogglebe |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 8:18am |
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I didn't think this was one of your better pieces, Helio. You just dropped a bunch of names into a script. It just didn't go anyway.
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Helio |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 10:16am |
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Old Timer Better to die with vodka than with tedium!
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Thanks guys for the reading!
Phil, I know that, but I'm trying to build these two character better than I did until now. Something deep and strong and of course funny can will come soon starred by them. Thanks for your time on it. |
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dogglebe |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 10:41am |
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That's funny. I'm doing the same thing with Bad PenguinPhil |
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Helio |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 10:56am |
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Old Timer Better to die with vodka than with tedium!
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Kevain & Thon meet Bad Penguin! |
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dogglebe |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 11:15am |
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Bad Penguin meets Kevin and Thon!
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Shelton |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 11:23am |
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Of The Ancients
LocationChicago Posts3292 Posts Per Day 0.49 |
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"I think I did pretty well, considering I started out with nothing but a bunch of blank paper." - Steve Martin |
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Helio |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 11:39am |
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Old Timer Better to die with vodka than with tedium!
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very funny!
Have you watched a cartoon by Nick Park, creator of Wallace and Gromit, that Gromit save the crown jewels from an expert thief penguin? But, I'm afraid I don't know where you can watch it, Phil. I copied it to jurassic oldest VHS from BBC, when I lived in London times ago. I'm not sure it is part of " A Grand Day Out" or "The wrong Trousers"
That short story was very funny and amusing short movie! |
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dogglebe |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 12:05pm |
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I've seen it, Helio. I try to catch all the Wallace and Gromit shows.
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Helio |
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 12:50pm |
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Old Timer Better to die with vodka than with tedium!
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I'm thinking to run off the stile very comom in the couple stories that show in some of them characters like: a shine and the extrovert, a quiet and agitated, a responsable and a inconsistent, a ascquiecent and astubborned and so on.
To run off these options is very dificult, maybe to creat just one character seems to be more easy to build than two without to fall into these options I've mentioned. |
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tomson |
Posted: September 22nd, 2006, 9:35pm |
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Quoted from dogglebe I didn't think this was one of your better pieces, Helio. You just dropped a bunch of names into a script. |
Yeah, but one of them was mine! That means this is an instant classic! Hey Helio, I like how you take the two lizards and further the story. Now they (Kevain and Thon) have a writer and they are excited about the possibilities. Kevain is dreaming the ultimate dream of success. (I noticed he looked at Brea's ass and not mine ) Then it's back to reality! I think you did well expanding the story and the way I see it, it could become a very interesting story as they experience the ins and outs of Hollywood. |
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