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Don
Posted: September 17th, 2006, 2:51pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Award Goes To… by Helio J Corderio - Short - Not just the universe and Hollywood is flooded by lots of stars, heads beaten as well! 14 pages - pdf, format


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Quoted from Don
by Helio J Corderio


Is that really necessary, Don?  

Another crazy addition to your collection, Helio my friend. Can't bust you about anything because I feel like this short accomplishes everything that it intends to. Nothing more, nothing less.

Gotta love the simply cameos, those were the highlights of this one.  



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Helio
Posted: September 18th, 2006, 6:14am Report to Moderator
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Better to die with vodka than with tedium!

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Hey Don, maby my new name "Corderio" is a type of numerology's thing that can bring me luck!

Z, my amigo, I'd like to say in public thank for your great help with this piece. The simply cameos are ever the highlights everywhere they appear.
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Mon ami Helio,

just one thing to say "We love you, nuts".

Michel


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funny thing!

I'm liking the adventures of those lizards!

keep on going!


Scripts :
- Hot Road (short)
- The Mirror (short)
- Listen Up (short)
- Dawn (short)
- One Day (short)
- Steal (short)

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dogglebe
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 8:18am Report to Moderator
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I didn't think this was one of your better pieces, Helio.  You just dropped a bunch of names into a script.  It just didn't go anyway.


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Helio
Posted: September 21st, 2006, 10:16am Report to Moderator
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Thanks guys for the reading!

Phil, I know that, but I'm trying to build these two character better than I did until now. Something deep and strong and of course funny can will come soon starred by them. Thanks for your time on it.
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dogglebe
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That's funny.  I'm doing the same thing with Bad Penguin


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Helio
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Kevain & Thon meet Bad Penguin!
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Bad Penguin meets Kevin and Thon!


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Helio
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very funny!

Have you watched a cartoon by Nick Park, creator of Wallace and Gromit, that Gromit save the crown jewels from  an expert thief penguin? But, I'm afraid I don't know where you can watch it, Phil. I copied it to jurassic oldest VHS from BBC, when I lived in London times ago. I'm not sure it is part of " A Grand Day Out" or "The wrong Trousers"

That short story was very funny and amusing short movie!
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I've seen it, Helio.  I try to catch all the Wallace and Gromit shows.


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Helio
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I'm thinking to run off the stile very comom in the couple stories that show in some of them characters like: a shine and the extrovert, a quiet and agitated, a responsable and a inconsistent, a ascquiecent and astubborned  and so on.

To run off these options is very dificult, maybe to creat just one character seems to be more easy to build than two without to fall into these options I've mentioned.
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Quoted from dogglebe
I didn't think this was one of your better pieces, Helio.  You just dropped a bunch of names into a script.

Yeah, but one of them was mine!
That means this is an instant classic!

Hey Helio,
I like how you take the two lizards and further the story.

Now they (Kevain and Thon) have a writer and they are excited about the possibilities.

Kevain is dreaming the ultimate dream of success.
(I noticed he looked at Brea's ass and not mine  )
Then it's back to reality!

I think you did well expanding the story and the way I see it, it could become a very interesting story as they experience the ins and outs of Hollywood.



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