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 OWC - Memories (currently 993 views) |
| SimplyScripts |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 8:52pm |
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AdministratorAdministrator  So, what are you writing?
LocationVirginia Posts5529 Posts Per Day 1.67 |
Memories by Crazy Horse - Short, Drama - Sometimes dramas are buried deeper than we think. - pdf, format  |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:29pm |
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LocationHighland, IN Posts3530 Posts Per Day 2.22 |
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| The boy who could fly |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:32pm |
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Yellow 
LocationBritish Columbia, Canada Posts1279 Posts Per Day 0.87 |
Well not sure what to say other than I liked this one, fit the challenge I guess, I kinda felt bad for some of the animals....but oh well. Good job  |
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| Zombie Sean |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:36pm |
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Yellow  I eat your brains and gain your knowledge.
LocationAnywhere there's a zombie... Posts1301 Posts Per Day 0.81 |
Same with Jordan here, I'm not sure whether I like it or not. It was a strange on indeed, and I do feel bad for dem animals der, but...I guess...
Sean |
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| Tommyp |
| Posted: April 10th, 2009, 11:50pm |
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Green  Continuity Is For Pussies...
LocationAustralia Posts775 Posts Per Day 1.54 |
Yeah don't read this one around the kids. Well, don't let them read it.
I would have liked to see a bit more of a build up for this one... it was pretty good though... |
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| Higgonaitor |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:05am |
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Yellow  I'm dreaming my life away.
LocationThats me in the spotlight, copying Bert. Posts1242 Posts Per Day 0.65 |
Yeah, i laughed. I think thats all you were going for. |
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| Andrew Allen |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:08am |
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Green  Lazy arse.
LocationSingapore Posts591 Posts Per Day 0.93 |
This was certainly an interesting little number!
It did make me chuckle, but drama!?
Entertaining read, however.
Andrew |
| "Well, we have to end apartheid for one. And slow down the nuclear arms race, stop terrorism and world hunger. We have to provide food and shelter for the homeless, and oppose racial discrimination and promote civil rights, while also promoting equal rights for women. We have to encourage a return to traditional moral values. Most importantly, we have to promote general social concern and less materialism in young people." |
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| mcornetto |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:10am |
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Location37° 49' S 144° 58' E Posts2649 Posts Per Day 2.28 |
This was cute. I'm not sure it was really a drama, it seemed more like a skit, but it was amusing. |
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| MBCgirl |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 12:26am |
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Purple  Some things are better left to the imagination!
LocationScottsdale Posts400 Posts Per Day 0.74 |
Hate to disagree guys...and it's not about the "F**king of animals" that I have a problem with...Uncle Eddie certainly lives in a different world...OBVIOUSLY.
The only positive thing I can say, is the twist at the end...albeit unwritten, was he got it in the end. *tee hee
Poor spelling, general mistakes throughout and it was short. You know me...I think anything we put up should be our best effort - at least in written form.
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| http://www.myspace.com/mbcgirl
I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.
When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.
MBCgirl =)
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| Dreamscale |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:08am |
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LocationArizona Posts2293 Posts Per Day 2.86 |
Another piece of s*** entry! C'mon people...WTF? Funny? OK, maybe at first, but it's a 1 line joke...3 frickin' pages...3 poorly written pages at that. No drama, whatsoever. no secret that I saw. Just rubbish...pure rubbish. Embarrassing, actually.
Hoping for alot more in the 2nd round.
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| Dressel |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:13am |
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Green 
LocationIrvine, CA Posts655 Posts Per Day 0.54 |
Another piece of s*** entry!
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I'm pretty sure, regardless of how bad the entry is, this is not appropriate. |
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Scripts I'm reading
1) "Headlong" by stevie
2) "The Bay" by Rob
3) "Complete" by James McClung
4) "Pub Lunch" by alffy
5) "Grand Avenue" by ajrscreenworks |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:14am |
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LocationHighland, IN Posts3530 Posts Per Day 2.22 |
I'm pretty sure, regardless of how bad the entry is, this is not appropriate.
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You are correct, sir. But I'm going to let it stay. |
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| Sham |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:18am |
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Purple 
LocationGeorgia Posts230 Posts Per Day 0.14 |
Another piece of s*** entry! C'mon people...WTF? Funny? OK, maybe at first, but it's a 1 line joke...3 frickin' pages...3 poorly written pages at that. No drama, whatsoever. no secret that I saw. Just rubbish...pure rubbish. Embarrassing, actually.
Hoping for alot more in the 2nd round.
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I didn't hate it nearly as much as you did, Dreamscale, but I didn't like it, either, at least not for this competition. It's an okay short on its on, but it's the wrong genre. I'll probably get a lot of "screwing farm animals is dramatic!" retorts, but that's not what comes to my mind when I think of drama. |
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| JamminGirl |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:23am |
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| Shelton |
| Posted: April 11th, 2009, 1:24am |
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LocationHighland, IN Posts3530 Posts Per Day 2.22 |
First post. The bolded part. Click on it. |
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