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Don
Posted: December 2nd, 2016, 10:42pm
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Star Trek: Desperado by Will Powell - Series, Scifi - Closer to being space marshals than explorers, the crew of the USS Desperado suddenly become the only hope a pre-warp society has against the galaxy's political and criminal powers. 48 pages - pdf, format
Star Trek: Desperado Episode 02 by J William Powell - Series, Sci Fi, Fantasy - Severely outgunned and severely outnumbered, Commander Rowe and the Desperado crew are faced with several crucial decisions that will determine their fate and that of the planet Sephos. - pdf, format
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Don - December 16th, 2016, 5:21pm
Miranda
Posted: May 24th, 2017, 4:55pm
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Hi Will, I know only the basic about this craft and English is not my first language, but I will tell you one thing the experts would say: "Less is more as far as word's count". We have to show and not tell a story. But you made the effort so keep writing!
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HyperMatt
Posted: October 16th, 2017, 6:47am
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Would the Federation really name a ship Desperado? Is this story set pre-Kirk, present-Kirk, or post-Kirk?
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TonyDionisio
Posted: October 18th, 2017, 11:35am
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Would the Federation really name a ship Desperado? Is this story set pre-Kirk, present-Kirk, or post-Kirk?
I thought the same thing after reading.
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HyperMatt
Posted: October 18th, 2017, 3:12pm
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I so miss the days of Next Generation-DS9-Voyager. Really good thought provoking writing.
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Pleb
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I'm gonna agree with Miranda. I burnt out after half a dozen pages. Shame cos it looked like it could be decent too. If you can slim it down I'd like to have another go though. Good luck.
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