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Don
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So, what are you writing?

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Star Trek: Desperado by Will Powell - Series, Scifi - Closer to being space marshals than explorers, the crew of the USS Desperado suddenly become the only hope a pre-warp society has against the galaxy's political and criminal powers.  48 pages - pdf, format

Star Trek: Desperado Episode 02 by J William Powell - Series, Sci Fi, Fantasy - Severely outgunned and severely outnumbered, Commander Rowe and the Desperado crew are faced with several crucial decisions that will determine their fate and that of the planet Sephos.  - pdf, format

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Miranda
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Hi Will,
I know only the basic about this craft and English is not my first language, but I will tell you one thing the experts would say: "Less is more as far as word's count". We have to show and not tell a story. But you made the effort so keep writing!
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Would the Federation really name a ship Desperado?  Is this story set pre-Kirk, present-Kirk, or post-Kirk?


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Quoted from HyperMatt
Would the Federation really name a ship Desperado?  Is this story set pre-Kirk, present-Kirk, or post-Kirk?


I thought the same thing after reading.
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I so miss the days of Next Generation-DS9-Voyager. Really good thought provoking writing.


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I'm gonna agree with Miranda. I burnt out after half a dozen pages.

Shame cos it looked like it could be decent too. If you can slim it down I'd like to have another go though.

Good luck.


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