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Posted: May 21st, 2020, 7:00am Report to Moderator
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Lots to like

A good concept, dating without touch. Big brother keeping the distance, . Inside a longing, but not to be ...

Almost made me weep

One silly idea, if they both kept their arms out , away from each other, how close could them get...almost a kiss. Could the play footsie under the table?

On this occasion I would almost start before the restaurant, to show the anticipation- you  go through the emotions from their

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Well written. A sad commentary of where we might be headed. Another story with the government overlords watching our every move.

I would've liked to have seen our couple trying to outwit the restrictions instead of just following the rules.

Good work, writer. Thanks for entering!
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