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July, 2008 One Week Challenge (currently 7268 views) |
alffy |
Posted: July 20th, 2008, 6:55am |
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LocationThe bleak North East, England Posts2187 Posts Per Day 0.33 |
Working for Royal Mail, I should be able to come up with something good for this but sadly my brains long since died a tradgic death with too much TV. |
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Posted: July 20th, 2008, 4:34pm |
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LocationMonroe, NC Posts10 Posts Per Day 0.00 |
I think I've got something that could prove promising.
Never written a drama, so we'll see. |
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BryMo |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 2:03pm |
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LocationOrlando Posts212 Posts Per Day 0.03 |
That line does read comedy...i guess the challenge is to make it a drama. And not rediculous. hmmmm... |
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stebrown |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 2:39pm |
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Been Around
LocationNewcastle, England Posts881 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
My thoughts exactly Brymo. What I've written so far is very much a comedy. It has a lot of conflict though....does that count? haha |
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Shelton |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 8:01pm |
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Of The Ancients
LocationChicago Posts3292 Posts Per Day 0.49 |
My thoughts exactly Brymo. What I've written so far is very much a comedy. It has a lot of conflict though....does that count? haha |
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1154562084/s-0/Look at that, read the logline, and notice that the genre and theme were Drama: At the end of a family barbecue. Then skim the script. Don't worry about commenting on it or anything, just give it a good once over. And lastly, look at my justification in the thread. Yeah, it's pretty much a comedy that I tried to bullshit my way out of. I wouldn't worry about it. I think entries are going to be way low this time around. The "use this line of dialogue" angle isn't my favorite approach to these things. |
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Takeshi |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 8:40pm |
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I think entries are going to be way low this time around. The "use this line of dialogue" angle isn't my favorite approach to these things.
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With so many of our members on school holidays, I would've thought that entry numbers would be up. As for the use of the line, I reckon it's a good idea, because a lot of short film festivals call for specific lines of dialogue to be in the films so that they know that the films are new. So I think having to write a specific line of dialogue is good practice. |
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Shelton |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 8:48pm |
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Of The Ancients
LocationChicago Posts3292 Posts Per Day 0.49 |
I don't think there's anything wrong with it, fundamentally, I was just saying that it's not my favorite route to go when writing things like this. The upside is that stories will be pretty varied.
Not sure what the turnout will be really. Feedback on here just seems slow though. |
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Takeshi |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 8:56pm |
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For sure. The theme "The guys at the post office are never gonna believe this" leaves it wide open for interpretation. |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 9:01pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7962 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I won't have time to write anything, but I will read. I'm interested in seeing what kind of "going postal" scripts you guys come up with. |
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Takeshi |
Posted: July 21st, 2008, 9:47pm |
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I'm interested in seeing what kind of "going postal" scripts you guys come up with. |
Hahaha. You've just forced three writers to change the title of their script. |
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stebrown |
Posted: July 22nd, 2008, 6:51am |
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LocationNewcastle, England Posts881 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
Yeah Mike, I actually read that script while the boards were down. Just haven't read too many of your scripts, so had a look at a few.
I remember a debate going on during the last OWC about what a drama is, so won't go into that again. I've written the major parts of mine and it is blatantly a comedy (worlds still do collide though) so it's too late to change it really.
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Great script by the way. |
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Takeshi |
Posted: July 22nd, 2008, 7:01am |
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You're not supposed to tell people if you're going in it or not, people. |
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stebrown |
Posted: July 22nd, 2008, 7:09am |
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Been Around
LocationNewcastle, England Posts881 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
I was just lying...or was I? |
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Zombie Sean |
Posted: July 22nd, 2008, 8:47am |
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LocationColorado Posts1547 Posts Per Day 0.23 |
I remember a debate going on during the last OWC about what a drama is, so won't go into that again. |
Ha ha, yeh, I think that happened on my script thread... Any way, this is a hard one! It's a new one to me because I've never done one where you have to have a quote as the major part of the script. I have this idea, but I don't know if it's that shocking to where the guys at the post office aren't going to believe it... Sean |
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: July 22nd, 2008, 6:20pm |
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Of The Ancients What if the Hokey Pokey, IS what it's all about?
LocationBowden, Alberta Posts3664 Posts Per Day 0.60 |
I just thought I'd say hello on the thread since people are saying it's quiet.
It probably runs in cycles.
I'll be doing my best to write for this one and hopefully I can read most if not all depending upon how many are submitted.
Good Luck to everyone!
Sandra
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