Checkpoint Charlie I wouldn't start a scene with dialogue; personally. Alex? Must be a slip of the pen happens, no worries I like the self-irony of this one. It's able to deliver what it wants, in a terse style. Except for difficult location (airport), it meets the criteria - some gore, dark tone, although lots of humor and sarcasm; liked all of that. Is it cobbled together somehow? Yep, I think so; but the writer noticeable gives a f*** on that and that's what makes this really good - The self-awareness about the self-irony makes a very entertaining storyline. Lots of talent. |