Very hard to write a funny script but you managed to do it. Honestly, the Ghost Hamster had the perfect amount of wit and charisma to make me keep reading.

Only criticism I have is the ending. Seemed like it could've been a little better.

Overall, a lot of potential here in terms of a young/young adult animated short. I hope you develop this!

Just read it and it's a very nice script! I was into it throughout. Nice suspence and all.

The only thing I didn't understand why Art wasn't free after he died.
I also think Bub is going to need more convincing from Art in the rewrite. But I understand that there are only 10 pages etc. So for the challenge it's a perfect script. Very captivating and PG-13, wow