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Hi there, i wrote a script, which is posted on this web site called 'Without Conscience'. That was a few years ago and since then i have shot my first feature film called 'Swimming in circles'. I shot it for under a hundred pounds and it's being screened next month. However the trailer is on You Tube and i would appriciate any feedback people might have on it, as the feedback i got for 'Without Conscience' really helped me with this film!
I thought the beginning of the trailer was great. Those are a lot of awkward questions and she doesn't seem to have any problem asking them.
It looks good. It looks like an independent film about a love story that I'd probably enjoy (such as Wristcutters: A Love Story, THAT was a good movie).
I liked the way it started and ended, but I would've liked to have a seen a few more scenes with dialogue in the middle, because it kinda came across as a music video that was book ended by one scene. Also, one of the questions that flashed up on the screen said "Do I have a drugs problem?" I would've written drug problem not drugs problem. But overall I thought it looked pretty interesting.
A few weeks back i put a post up for people too take a look at the trailer for my first Feature film, called Swimming in circles! From just that i got some really helpfull feedback along with a few offers from film festivals, which i was really surprised by. I just wanted to thank anyone who watched my trailer! It's strange to make a film for a hundred quid and have people say they really liked it. For Anyone who hasn't seen it and would like too it's available on You Tube. And the film has a number of screenings lined up! Also if anyone's made a really low budget film (Hundreds not thousands) and there's a trailer or anything online, i'd love to see it!
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