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Ledbetter
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:02pm Report to Moderator
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Poor Reindeer...

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Sandra Elstree.
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What if the Hokey Pokey, IS what it's all about?

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Poor Reindeer...

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How 'bout Old Dutch? Ajax?

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Quoted from Baltis.
I don't know when or where this thread was turned into "Phrases or sayings" you don't use in a screenplay -- but "WORDS" you don't use in a screenplay are as followed

Is
Are
The
That
Then
Walk
Sit(s)
Stand(s)
Look(s)
Of The
Just
Begin(s)
Start(s)
Really
Very
Suddenly
Quickly
Hesitantly
Instantly

And many, many, many more...   Avoiding "THE" was the hardest thing for me to do until I found out these past 6 months it's not in reference to only in passing.


Hey, what do you know! We agree 100% on something!

One of my pet peeves is "just". He just stands there! She just walks away!

He or she "starts" to do something! Either they are doing it or not.

I also agree with 'ly words. I occasionally use them myself, but very seldom. Pet peeve here being "slowly"!!! I hate it!!

I know this will irritate some people, but I also feel the word "and" could be cut down, but maybe that's just me.


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Ledbetter
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Sandra,

OLD DUTCH and AJAX sound like a couple of cops gone bad.

Old Dutch being the nice cop and AJAX being the abrasive one...

But it works! LOL

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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:18pm Report to Moderator
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Sandra,

OLD DUTCH and AJAX sound like a couple of cops gone bad.

Old Dutch being the nice cop and AJAX being the abrasive one...

But it works! LOL

Shawn.....><


Ok, wait. Have you ever cleaned a sink before? Do you shop for abrasive cleansers?  



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Ledbetter
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I have house keep to do that.

But I hear it's fun...

Gloves and all.

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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:33pm Report to Moderator
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I have house keep to do that.

But I hear it's fun...

Gloves and all.

Shawn.....><


Truthfully, I don't mind it at all. I guess it's the same reason I don't mind polishing scripts. I just need to clone myself though because I run out of time to do all of the the good stuff I have planned.

Maybe Old Dutch and Ajax can become Fairy God Fellows helping with that.

Sandra



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Baltis.
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:38pm Report to Moderator
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My avatar is of me reenacting "the flaming gloves of sigmund" right before I had to clean my daughters paint off the floor and wall.  But I've been known to keep a tidy house and feel no shame in moping, cleaning or scrubing.  
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Ledbetter
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Sandra...

Well played!

Good names for a script. Eh?

Shawn.....><

Balt-

It could also be you just about asking an elephant to cough.

Okay-Okay, I clean house too. I dont have House keep. There, you happy.

In fact, I do the cooking as well and love it.

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My avatar is of me reenacting "the flaming gloves of sigmund" right before I had to clean my daughters paint off the floor and wall.  But I've been known to keep a tidy house and feel no shame in moping, cleaning or scrubing.  


Balt, is your birthday in June by any chance?

Sandra



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I actually like cleaning.  Dunno why???  I only cook meatloaf... can't cook anything else.  I can grill to a degree, but often feel better if someone more capable is there to do it for me.  

Yes, my birthday is in June.
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Sandra Elstree.
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I actually like cleaning.  Dunno why???  I only cook meatloaf... can't cook anything else.  I can grill to a degree, but often feel better if someone more capable is there to do it for me.  

Yes, my birthday is in June.


Does that make me psychic? Or does that just make me a good reader?

I really thought twice about asking that question, but I really felt that connection and so thus

Had to ask.

No wonder I feel a big echo when you speak.  

I always appreciate your posts. Even when... (well you know when...) Sometimes (quite regularly) I go off the deep end, too.

No worries,

Sandra



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