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words you should never write in a script (currently 2826 views) |
leitskev |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 6:49pm |
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Please, for the love of whiskey, don't ever use this.
**It tastes just like chicken.**
Thanks
Feel free to add more such expressions. |
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dogglebe |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 7:00pm |
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Mary ate her fish dinner, wishing he had ordered the chicken.
BOB (40), a senior bank manager, walks along the beach...
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wonkavite |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:03pm |
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...and that's when Amanda discovered her special purpose.... |
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Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:04pm |
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I'm getting too old for this sh*t. |
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Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:06pm |
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leitskev |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:16pm |
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I'm already booked, Ryan, so hopefully the beer ain't too warm. Oh, you mean don't use that. Ok, that too. |
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Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:19pm |
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Hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia |
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Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:29pm |
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Quoted from mcornetto Hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia |
Conventional weapons are useless against it. |
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dogglebe |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:34pm |
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JOHN walks into the dining room.
MAUREEN (40), JOSEPH (40), MAGGIE (35), THERESA (33), LIZZIE (30), TRACY (25), DONNA (27), BRIAN (20), KATIE (40), JAMES (35), SALLY (50), MICHAEL (55), BEN (25) and STEVE (20) sit around the table, eating.
Christ, I hate that!
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Posted: October 5th, 2011, 8:46pm |
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Please, for the love of whiskey, don't ever use this.
**It tastes just like chicken.**
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I have used that one, but it was sort of making fun of it. It was a very sick script... |
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leitskev |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 9:11pm |
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Parody is acceptable. I heard the line in a film today, and it annoyed me. |
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Posted: October 5th, 2011, 9:33pm |
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But resistance is futile. |
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Pii |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 9:50pm |
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New Procrastinator in residence.
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Let's get out of here!
Don't you die on me. |
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 10:03pm |
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Yes-yes, Ryan. It's a date. What table? I personally like the corners, but the middle will be fine too, if that's your preference. Can we make sure everyone has nametags? That way I have a reference point from 2011? Thanks a bunch, G-d love ya! Sandra |
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leitskev |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 10:30pm |
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Don't trust name tags in hell. |
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 10:37pm |
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Don't trust name tags in hell. |
That might be a very good and new byline. Sandra |
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leitskev |
Posted: October 5th, 2011, 10:54pm |
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I'm going to use that instead of Fade In from now on. |
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RayW |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 3:05am |
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We see an unfilmable.
As the camera pans across the filthy unkempt room, beer bottles, pizza boxes, bags of chips, etc. we see that the sleeping and obviously intoxicated Sean Connery look-alike was likely not breast fed by his mother, Pam (40-ish, like Marisa Tomei 40, not Kirstie Alley 40). |
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RayW - October 6th, 2011, 8:14am | EDIT: proof reading your own witticisms at three in the morning is the recipe for fail. | | |
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Posted: October 6th, 2011, 5:52am |
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leitskev |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 6:34am |
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Stay out my room, Ray, not gonna tell you again. No filming there. |
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wonkavite |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 7:22am |
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Kev, I always suspected about you and Sean Connery (or at least his look a like.) Now I have written proof. |
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leitskev |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 7:44am |
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Lol unfortunately the only thing I have in common with Connery is fading follicles and a taste for scotch! |
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RayW |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 8:16am |
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Stay out my room, Ray, not gonna tell you again. No filming there. |
Sorry. I thought it was the bathroom. (Ray stumbles back into Kev's common law legal-enough daughter's trailer bedroom). |
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Electric Dreamer |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 10:10am |
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You know what you're problem is? I'll tell you what your problem is!
Ugh.
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leitskev |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 10:12am |
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It's all about the money. Follow the money. |
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James McClung |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 11:30am |
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You just don't get it, do you? |
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Posted: October 6th, 2011, 11:36am |
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There are some things worse than death. |
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Posted: October 6th, 2011, 1:19pm |
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I call it... 'The Aristocrats!' |
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RayW |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 1:56pm |
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We see a screenwriter staring at the brutality of a blinking cursor on an expansive empty page of celtx.
He pulls a drag from a cigarette, blows dragon smoke from his nostrils, then stabs it out among the dirty flower arrangement of other filters.
Finally he types.
On screen we see him crafting a story of nubile filmmakers making their first horror story.
At a cabin.
In the woods.
Where they will die one by one.
We see the writer's narcissism consumes him.
(Excuse me while I go vomit... ) |
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Posted: October 6th, 2011, 2:34pm |
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Not original, but -
"We've got to act NOW!"
One thing I detest in films is when a couple, in dire circumstances (inc end of the world) stop to talk about their feelings and their relationship. |
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leitskev |
Posted: October 6th, 2011, 2:54pm |
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That's a perfect example, Simon.
I used a couple in a script today:
"They'll be sittin' ducks!"
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"I know I can count on you." |
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Posted: October 6th, 2011, 2:59pm |
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Posted: October 6th, 2011, 3:08pm |
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I'll be back. |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 5:54pm |
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"stop screwing around"
"quit goofin' on me"
"not on my watch"
"there was this guy with a burned face and knives for fingers"
"I want your badge and gun"
"he's the BEST there is!"
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Don |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 6:20pm |
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I've got a bad feeling about this. |
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 6:56pm |
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The use of "chiseled" drives me wild. Guess I've just seen it too often.
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:21pm |
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Personally, I have decided to stop using 'Well' and 'What?'
WELL is hugely obnoxious. I've never seen a piece of dialog that wouldn't be vastly improved without it.
"Well, just let me think about it." Ugh!
WHAT is even worse. The problem with WHAT is that people use it all the time in real life, so it sounds so natural when you put it in a script.
Tim: Sorry I'm late but I had to stop a kill a family of four on my way to the office.
Sandra: What?
See? What does Tim do here? Repeat the story over? My personal rule is that everybody hears everything perfectly the first time and responds accordingly.
Tim: Sorry I'm late but i had to stop and kill a family of four on my way to the office. Sandra: How are the anger management classes going?
Maybe not perfect. But ANYTHING is better than WHAT. Banish it! Banished I say! |
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:33pm |
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Personally, I have decided to stop using 'Well' and 'What?'
WELL is hugely obnoxious. I've never seen a piece of dialog that wouldn't be vastly improved without it.
"Well, just let me think about it." Ugh!
WHAT is even worse. The problem with WHAT is that people use it all the time in real life, so it sounds so natural when you put it in a script.
Tim: Sorry I'm late but I had to stop a kill a family of four on my way to the office.
Sandra: What?
See? What does Tim do here? Repeat the story over? My personal rule is that everybody hears everything perfectly the first time and responds accordingly.
Tim: Sorry I'm late but i had to stop and kill a family of four on my way to the office. Sandra: How are the anger management classes going?
Maybe not perfect. But ANYTHING is better than WHAT. Banish it! Banished I say! |
A very very good piece of advice. I'm sure we can always find exceptions, but in every way, we need to learn to cut excess out unless it's applicable somehow to character or flavor and spice of the story in general. We need to learn to make that judgement call based upon the individual story/characters in question. Good post, Conwall. Definitely brings something to the table to think about. Sandra |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:40pm |
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I can't quit you...
You had me at hello...
You can be my wing man...
Is there a Doctor in the house?
It's not over until I say it's over...
You're my wife Damnit...
Never give up
Freedom...
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Baltis. |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:45pm |
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I don't know when or where this thread was turned into "Phrases or sayings" you don't use in a screenplay -- but "WORDS" you don't use in a screenplay are as followed
Is Are The That Then Walk Sit(s) Stand(s) Look(s) Of The Just Begin(s) Start(s) Really Very Suddenly Quickly Hesitantly Instantly
And many, many, many more... Avoiding "THE" was the hardest thing for me to do until I found out these past 6 months it's not in reference to only in passing. |
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Ledbetter |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:50pm |
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Balt-
I guess from the first thread where...
**It tastes just like chicken.**
was the example used.
Maybe the name of the thread should have been differient.
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Baltis. |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:54pm |
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Quoted from Ledbetter Balt-
Maybe the name of the thread should have been differient.
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"I'd buy that for a dollar..." Oh wait... Don't use that either. |
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:56pm |
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Quoted from Baltis. I don't know when or where this thread was turned into "Phrases or sayings" you don't use in a screenplay -- but "WORDS" you don't use in a screenplay are as followed
Is Are The That Then Walk Sit(s) Stand(s) Look(s) Of The Just Begin(s) Start(s) Really Very Suddenly Quickly Hesitantly Instantly
And many, many, many more... Avoiding "THE" was the hardest thing for me to do until I found out these past 6 months it's not in reference to only in passing. |
It's a good list, but I know it doesn't work in the real world of screenwriting. And this is why: Sometimes, the best word to use is: Look/s as opposed to trying to get fancy. I don't think it's the words themselves that are at fault, but writers who use the easy words consistently without thinking. That's the problem. And yeah... Just That's a really useless one. Sandra |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 9:57pm |
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Ha!
Hey-
In your AVATAR...
It seems...YOU'RE REACHING FOR THE STARS MA..
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:01pm |
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Quoted from Ledbetter Ha!
Hey-
In your AVATAR...
It seems...YOU'RE REACHING FOR THE STARS MA..
Shawn.....>< |
Nope, he's getting ready to scrub the sink with Comet. Sandra |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:02pm |
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Poor Reindeer...
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Sandra Elstree. |
Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:04pm |
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Quoted from Ledbetter Poor Reindeer...
Shawn.....>< |
How 'bout Old Dutch? Ajax? Sandra |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:06pm |
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Quoted from Baltis. I don't know when or where this thread was turned into "Phrases or sayings" you don't use in a screenplay -- but "WORDS" you don't use in a screenplay are as followed
Is Are The That Then Walk Sit(s) Stand(s) Look(s) Of The Just Begin(s) Start(s) Really Very Suddenly Quickly Hesitantly Instantly
And many, many, many more... Avoiding "THE" was the hardest thing for me to do until I found out these past 6 months it's not in reference to only in passing. |
Hey, what do you know! We agree 100% on something! One of my pet peeves is "just". He just stands there! She just walks away! He or she "starts" to do something! Either they are doing it or not. I also agree with 'ly words. I occasionally use them myself, but very seldom. Pet peeve here being "slowly"!!! I hate it!! I know this will irritate some people, but I also feel the word "and" could be cut down, but maybe that's just me. |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:10pm |
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Sandra,
OLD DUTCH and AJAX sound like a couple of cops gone bad.
Old Dutch being the nice cop and AJAX being the abrasive one...
But it works! LOL
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:18pm |
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Quoted from Ledbetter Sandra,
OLD DUTCH and AJAX sound like a couple of cops gone bad.
Old Dutch being the nice cop and AJAX being the abrasive one...
But it works! LOL
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Ok, wait. Have you ever cleaned a sink before? Do you shop for abrasive cleansers? |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:24pm |
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I have house keep to do that.
But I hear it's fun...
Gloves and all.
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Sandra Elstree. |
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Quoted from Ledbetter I have house keep to do that.
But I hear it's fun...
Gloves and all.
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Truthfully, I don't mind it at all. I guess it's the same reason I don't mind polishing scripts. I just need to clone myself though because I run out of time to do all of the the good stuff I have planned. Maybe Old Dutch and Ajax can become Fairy God Fellows helping with that. Sandra |
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Posted: November 1st, 2011, 10:40pm |
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Sandra... Well played! Good names for a script. Eh? Shawn.....>< Balt- It could also be you just about asking an elephant to cough. Okay-Okay, I clean house too. I dont have House keep. There, you happy. In fact, I do the cooking as well and love it. Shawn....>< |
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Quoted from Baltis. My avatar is of me reenacting "the flaming gloves of sigmund" right before I had to clean my daughters paint off the floor and wall. But I've been known to keep a tidy house and feel no shame in moping, cleaning or scrubing. |
Balt, is your birthday in June by any chance? Sandra |
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I actually like cleaning. Dunno why??? I only cook meatloaf... can't cook anything else. I can grill to a degree, but often feel better if someone more capable is there to do it for me. Yes, my birthday is in June. |
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Sandra Elstree. |
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Quoted from Baltis. I actually like cleaning. Dunno why??? I only cook meatloaf... can't cook anything else. I can grill to a degree, but often feel better if someone more capable is there to do it for me. Yes, my birthday is in June. |
Does that make me psychic? Or does that just make me a good reader? I really thought twice about asking that question, but I really felt that connection and so thus Had to ask. No wonder I feel a big echo when you speak. I always appreciate your posts. Even when... (well you know when...) Sometimes (quite regularly) I go off the deep end, too. No worries, Sandra |
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