Thanks Breanne, sorry it didn't really grab you.

The mother didn't have a name because her importance to the script was that she was a mother. I don't normally do that but I thought it might work. The only real 'character' in this is Tony and I really went to develop him as far as possible, unfortunately at the expense of the others. Thought that would be best given how much time I had to spend on the script.

Anyway thanks for checking it out. I'm working on my soulshadows episode at the minute but after that I'll probably come back to this one and develop it further.

Stephen