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Rob

Posted: February 25th, 2022, 8:20pm

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I love this line: "Charles observes with all the passion of a man watching a documentary."

The SQUEAK, SQUEAK distraction is also excellent.

I appreciate the extra twist of pride at the end--the desire for sales.

There are so many direct references to pride at the end of the script. Removing one or two might be worthwhile.

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