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Posted: December 11th, 2019, 11:16pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Tim Zarus and the New Argonauts by Tim McKenzie - Sci Fi, Fantasy - Amid the chaos and turmoil into which society on Earth has fallen, a young man dreams himself, his two brothers and their dog escaping from the planet by flying their Chevy Equinox minivan into outer space, where they find themselves helping and guiding a noble if motley band of space heroes as they explore a alien dinosaur planet, battle space pirates, and brave an asteroid belt before retrieving a glowing gold ball guarded by an alien dragon on a remote planet. 187 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice


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You have an extra blank line between your Character and the dialogue - get rid of those.

No reason to put the dialogue in italics


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