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Don
Posted: August 17th, 2009, 10:04pm Report to Moderator
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Superman: Man of Steel by Jacob F. Keller - Action - Unknown/Unproduced version wherein Superman takes on the sinister android Metallo with a Kryptonite heart. 116 pages - pdf, format


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If this was a fan fiction script - I loved it!  Every part of it.  Metallo, Lex, Lois, Jimmy, Clark having a hard time doing what us humans have to do, tell someone how we feel.  It's harder than saving the world some times!

Well done, and I just went from page to page wanting to see what would happen next!
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I just took a quick peek at this one, but this looks like a pretty solid and fun read. Putting it on my list to sit down and check it out more thoroughly.
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I really enjoyed it


It had something for everyone
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Um,

25 pages in and nothing happens. The opening scene was weak and is there any reason to re-introduce us to the superman story? No antagonist was established and the dialog reads like a tv series -  which btw is not bad,  just not big screen worthy.

I would start cutting away and amp the first 25 way up. On a plus, the writing is polished,  dialog a bit on the nose, and we need more conflict.

Gl with the script

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