The Cherry Vine by Darren J Seeley - Action, Adventure - The mob wants him dead; the feds want him alive. They both have to wait in line. 118 pages - pdf, format

Darren,

This is gonna be a strange review, but I just wanted to acknowledge that I read this.   Around page 40 I found myself skimming, partly because I wanted to get to the end and see what happens to Colin Cherry, and partly because I was beginning to feel overwhelmed with all the characters.   That was a mistake because it threw off the flow.    I'm gonna have to reread it another day when I've got more time and patience.

One thing's for sure, you've got a confident and unique voice.   It deserves a second look.   Kind of reminded me of Smokin' Aces and Shades Within.  

PS - Check for typos.  I spotted a few.