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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Unproduced Screenplay Discussion    Action/Adventure Scripts  ›  The Cherry Vine Moderators: bert
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Posted: October 5th, 2010, 6:10pm Report to Moderator

So, what are you writing?

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The Cherry Vine by Darren J Seeley - Action, Adventure - The mob wants him dead; the feds want him alive. They both have to wait in line. 118 pages - pdf, format

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This is gonna be a strange review, but I just wanted to acknowledge that I read this.   Around page 40 I found myself skimming, partly because I wanted to get to the end and see what happens to Colin Cherry, and partly because I was beginning to feel overwhelmed with all the characters.   That was a mistake because it threw off the flow.    I'm gonna have to reread it another day when I've got more time and patience.

One thing's for sure, you've got a confident and unique voice.   It deserves a second look.   Kind of reminded me of Smokin' Aces and Shades Within.  

PS - Check for typos.  I spotted a few.  
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