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Don
Posted: August 31st, 2016, 4:53pm Report to Moderator
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Dunkleosteus by Robert Stokley - Action, Adventure - An intelligent hillbilly Kevin McPharlan, faces opposition from a fishing community of Chesapeake Bay, on the Patuxent River. Conflict arises as a conniving deputy sheriff Doyle Stieber, tries to sabotage a task force assigned to rid the area of a gigantic prehistoric predator fish called "Dunkleosteus".   128 pages - pdf, format



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It's really too bad the writing on display is so incredibly poor, as I do enjoy me some good old fashioned creature features.

The logline is a dead give away of what's to follow, but I actually read the entire 1st scene, which is just literally loaded with every mistake in the book - misspellings, missing punctuation, extremely awkward writing, misuse of apostrophes, character's names changing and being misspelled, and some of the worst dialogue imaginable.

Love the idea, but the writing is just awful.  


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Damnit, get to the point!

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How does one even pronounce the title?
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