Yuan Fen by Mike Garcia - Action, Adventure - Alan is a retired mercenary who is hired to kill a famous killer known with the nickname of "Yuan Fen".  191 pages - pdf format

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@Mike

You would benefit greatly from reading as many screenplays as possible. You will most likely develop a natural understanding of the format and pacing from simply reading. You could also consult a few format books like Dave Trottier's.  Good job getting the idea down on paper, now you need to figure out how to make it look like a proper screenplay.

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