American Ninjas: Wanted Dead or Alive: The semi-tru story of how my best friend and I tried to kill the world's most notorious drug lord for $25 million by Jason Benoit - Action, Adventure, Comedy, Drama, War - A dying father and an ex-Pat with nothing to live for team up in an attempt to claim a $25 million FBI bounty by trying to capture the world's most notorious drug lord.  121 pages - pdf format

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read up to page 10. The title needs work IMO, but then again, a movie called Three Billboards Outside Ebbing Missouri was a masterpiece so, take it with a grain of salt.  The screenplay is great so far, really great writing.  I think some people may pass on opening up the script because of the  title which is a mistake i think. I will continue to read, you're a talented writer.

Thx... yeah title may be doing the opposite of my intention.

Doing some brief fly bys of scripts as I'm having the morning coffee. Took in the first 20 of this.

A) Writing is stellar!
B) Dialogue very solid.
C) Title - not good at all

My only gripe is the first Carla - Mitch scene. I've seen this a thousand times in movies right down to the nature of the dialogue. Look for something new/creative here.

Really solid writing though.